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Published: 2011-11-16 02:11:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 810; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 14
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$10 commission of Vince Cobalt (a Homestuck Fantroll)I started a Tumblr where I draw fantrolls for fun in between work art: [link]
And thank goodness I'm finally starting to finish up those other commissions I owe, oof.
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Ok, here are my thoughts on this drawing.
The things I like.
The energy of this is fantastic. The life you bring to your work is always something I admire. And you color choice is fantastic. The piece has a great harmony to it.
The circle composition is very pleasing and does great drawing the eye to the center of focus and the slight diagonal the figure cuts pops her out very well.
The face and expression is wonderful. I love all of that.
The things I think you could improve on.
The body is a bit too long. The taper is too much for the length of the body. If the body didnt taper so small so fast the figure would look much better.
Also the figure's hands looks off especially the right one. The turn looks off.
And the lines to denote the muscles of the neck are off. They do not line up to the correct points.
I would like to see you be a bit more dramatic with your 'movement elements'. Anything that moves or flaps, like the hair and the jacket here. The jacket has a lot of life but the hair is stiff. Bit are movement points. It would have looked tighter to have both move.
And since the scythe's roundness blends in so much with the background element it would have worked better to tilt it or add a lens flare.
Overall this is fantasic and you are growing all the time. I am so proud of you! <3
Love you! And I hope it helps!
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>w> This is looks like a Vriska x Gamzee lovechild.
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Haha, he kinda does, how silly.
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He actually kinda is, haha! :V
Sketching your commish btw
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Sweet! I'll be happy to see it. :3
I might ask for another in the future. I really love your style.
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That'd be lovely~ and I should have more time to do more soon haha. I've been so busy with moving I didn't get to barely do art. D|
thank you by the waaay <3
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I completely understand, my art and stories pretty much shut down around this time of year due to holidays. I'm also a freshman in college, aiming to go into nursing so that takes its toll as well.
And you're so welcome!
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