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thebigblackdevil5 — America x Reader: A Sweet Goodnight
Published: 2013-06-24 20:21:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 2745; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 5
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Description My first reader fic, please be kind to me.

(Y/n) toss and turn around her bed; this was the fourth day  that she couldn't sleep. What the heck is happening to me...? she thought, as she was laying on her. Was she thinking about Alfred... No.... he wasn't into girls like her...

She slowly stood up from the bed, just staring at her soft white-blue blanket. She touched the fabric of it. Maybe it was best for het to make a cup of hot chocolate, or something to keep herself come. Reader stood up from the bed, as she was about to head out from her room her phone began to ring.

''Who could be calling me at this time?'' she mumbled, walking to the night stand. Once she reached her phone, Reader made a face...... the caller ID read unknown. This was odd, to odd actually.

She thought maybe it was one of her goofy friends just trying to scare he; she press the ignored button. However the phone once more making her a little wary about this. She didn't know what to do, finally she sigh as she answer the phone.

She was nervous, she took a deep breath, putting the phone against her ear. ''H-hello?''

''....Hello?'' said a voice.... a male voice!

The (your h/c) headed girl was surprised; however she didn't let her emotions get to her right away, she spoke,'' Yes, who is this?''
The person on the other lightly chuckled at her the comment. Reader didn't like this one bit.

''It's Alfred, you know from History class,'' the voice replied back making the girl stood there with wide eyes. Her crush, Alfred was calling her, she was so excited that she almost squeal but she had to play that cool act.

She clear her throat a little. ''Oh yes, I know you,'' she replied in a calm tone. Of course, she was happy that Alfred was calling her but this seem a little too suspicious, but she kept her cool.

Alfred just chuckled once again. ''That's great, hey listen um....(y/n).....Um... Can I come over to talk you about something,'' Alfred asked.

''This late?'' she asked.

''Yeah, it's important,'' he replied to her.

There was silence in the other end, of course she was happy that they were talking but odd feeling kept hurting. 'I better think if something fast,'' she thought.

''Why I ask what is that you wanted to talk to me about?''

He stood quiet for a while, okay this was a little awkward; the suspicious grew even more. (Y/n) clear her thought as the young man made a soft sound; it seems that got his attention.  (Y/n) waited for him patiently to reply back to her.

''It's something, okay. I will just see you soon, bye,'' he said quickly, hanging up the phone.

''Wha-?'' She was cut off when he hung up the phone, she put the phone down. She was excited that her crush was coming over to her but something about the loud American boy was giving her the odd feeling, but she felt..... if he was going to tease her.

(Y/n) just sat on the edge of the bed, wrapping her arms around herself. ''Why do I feel so darn happy but sad at the same time... No, Alfred isn't like other boys, he wants to come so he could talk to me,'' she sigh.

Maybe she just there for a while before getting up from the bed, thinking she could make hot chocolate for the both of them, maybe that will calm her mind. She open her bed room and went downstairs to the kitchen.

*xx*

As (Y/n) reached the kitchen, she turn on the lights; the kitchen was small but she liked small kitchens because she didn't like to clean big kitchens. She walked up the left cabinet and open it to take out the stuff for the hot chocolate.

Once she got the power out, she set it down on the counter. She smiled a little thinking that this will be a little romantic if it was winter; Alfred and her snuggling up with a warm blanket or sitting near a warm fire place, and  drinking something warm.

(Y/n) slightly blushed at the little fantasy of hers, than she shook her head.
''Gah! Get it together, girl, remember you need to stay strong in front of him,'' she said out loud.

Of course the little odd feeling of suspicious grew, but she try not to fear the worst, after all... he just wanted to talk to her and he sounded pretty serious about this. (Y/n) turn her head to see the other cabinet, she was about to open it to get the mugs when she heard the door bell.

That was fast.

(Y/n) walked out to the door. Once she was walking towards it, she noticed the mirror near the door, noticing she was still in her pajamas! The (your hair color) head girl just felt her cheeks turn a bright pink, well this wasn't going to lovely night.
 
''Oh, who cares.....,'' she mumbled under her breath as she fixed her a bit.
After checking her, she turn to face the brown door, she took a long deep breath and open the door. Standing there was, Alfred F. Jones--the captain of the football team, and (y/n) longest time crush; her cheeks began to turn a slightly pinkish.

He was wearing brown sandals, a pair of light blue jeans, and a dark green jacket; his hands were inside the pocket of the pocket. ''Hey,'' he said in a quiet matter. (Y/n) gave him a warm soft smile,'' H-Hello, Alfred, please come in.''

The blonde nodded, walking into the house. He began to look, as (y/n) closed the door behind. Closing the door, the girl's heart began to beat faster; her body was heating up. Was it because of the odd felling that he was going to trick her, or was it something more...?

Alfred turn to face her. ''Sorry if I called in a odd time, but I really needed to talk to you about this,'' he said as he took one hand out of the pocket, and placed it on the back of his neck.

Al was the type of guy that everyone thought of as the 'hero' or the guy that loves hamburgers, but tonight something was different about him. In a sorta good/odd way. He seem more relaxed and shy than his usual self.

''Hey, no worries, I couldn't sleep either way,'' (y/n) said, making herself laughed. She stop when she realized what she said, making her face turn a bright red color now, looking down.  ''I'm such a freaking idiot.....'

She really hope that her crush didn't hear the last part....''Hey (y/n), not to be rude but may I have a something to drink ,'' Alfred said.

(Y/n) looked up quickly looked up.

''W-well I was about to make hot chocolate f-f-for the both of us,'' she hesitant slightly. Alfred, not realizing the girl was acting 'nervous' just smiled and nodded.
''That will be cool, dude.'' He said.

She nodded. ''Why don't you wait in the kitchen while I make the drinks.'' Alfred nodded, walking to the living room.

Why must she get  like this around him, she had to tell herself that she needed to be strong and not let her weakness get the better of her. (Y/n) made her way into the kitchen.

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As the Al got to the living, he sat down on the couch. He felt a little nervous; this wasn't like him at all, he was so cheerful around any girl, but (Y/n) was a different type of girl. (Y/n) wasn't like other girls, she was different.... She wasn't the type that 'party girl' that just wanted to have a little fun.

(Y/n) was a kind, caring, and shy girl, that's what Alfred liked about her so much.
He placed a hand though his hair, as he was trying to act like himself but that little spark of 'love' was growing. After all, he had dated other girls before, but they just wanted to sleep with him because he was the football team captain.
This really annoyed as hell.

Alfred just let out a sigh, turning his head to the right to see a picture of her and her friends, the picture was taken in the beach. He reached out for the picture to look at it closely, as he got it, he smiled.

''That picture was taken about years ago,'' said (Y/n).

The blonde jumped, he didn't even heard her come in the room, he turn to smiled at her as she giggled. The (your hair color) headed girl was holding a tray of the hot chocolate. Alfred put the picture back where he found it, and stood up to help her out.

''Thanks.''

''No problem, du-I mean (y/n),'' he slightly blushed when he took the tray and accidently almost called her 'dude.' She just gave him a playful look as she walked to the couch, sitting on the couch she just looked at the tray once he gently placed it down.

''Thanks for making the drinks,'' Alfred said calmly, picking one of cup up.

She turn face him, staring into those beautiful blue orbs of his. She wanted to stay at them for hours and hours, but.... she knew that there was a reason why he was here..... Slowly, she gaze at the tray just saying.

''Your welcome, Alfred. ''

*xx*

After drinking his hot chocolate, he licked his  lips. He looked like a innocent child just doing that, he flashed a grin. ''Man, that was really good! That was better than Iggy's hot chocolate!''

(Y/n) just looked at him with a 'are you serious' type of expression. Alfred just chuckled at this.

''I see, anyways, I'm glad you like the drink,'' (y/n) replied, pressing her mug on the tray. ''However, you had a reason to come over, am I right?'' she gaze at him, waiting for a reply from him.

Alfred looked down. ''Your right.....I came here to talk....,'' he said in a serious tone.
(Y/n) turn her full attention to him; Al's voice was so serious.
She didn't knew that he could sound so serious, usually she knew him as her goofy-crush... but something in his voice just changed him. She gulp a bit, not wanting to cause something.

'Why....? Why does he want do this to me? '' her thought were running around, thinking bad she negative. (Y/n) looked  at her knees and  made a fist. 'I-I-I can't stop thinking that he's just going to make fun of me. No, I need to stay and face the truth, I don't want to be a coward!'

Alfred finally slowly lifted up his head, looking at her. ''Well.... it's about a girl.''
So that's why he was acting a little strange.

He was just needed some advice for a girl, of course she was slightly happy that Al wasn't playing a nasty trick on her, but felt mostly sad as to know that her crush liked a other girl.

Her beat began to beat faster, knowing this was hurting her, but she had to put on a brave face. Alfred came to her for a reason, she couldn't turn her back on him.

''Well....,'' she began. ''If you really like this girl, I suggest you start off slow. Girls, don't like pushy guys, and they like sweet loving boys,'' she said, pushing her hangs away from her face.

''You want to slowly start to talk to her little by lit-''

''I talk to her couple of times, but I feel like she's my special someone.... ,'' the blonde lightly chuckled. He couldn't believe that he was going to this to (y/n), the girl that he li-loved.

He lifted up his arm, placing it near his the back of his neck.
Alfred just gave her a warm smile, while rubbing his neck nervously.  ''I know that seem cheesy, but she is special.''

''That isn't cheesy at all, Al.''

The blonde blinked twice. ''You don't think so?'' (Y/n) shook her head, it hurt that her crush had feelings for some other girl, nut she didn't know the girl that Alfred was after was her. (Y/n) gently rub her nervously, a very bad habit; her voice was soft when she spoke.

''W-W-Well i-it's getting late, I think you better go and tell this girl how you r-really feel....,'' still looking down as she got up from the couch. Alfred looked at her, he gave her a look. Did she think he was crushing on someone else.
He blinked a couple of time, well this was interesting.

He couldn't help but smile but that didn't help because he started to laugh. (Y/n) slightly lift up her head towards him, she looked hurt from this. '''W-Why are you laughing?''

He grin at her. ''You're so cute,'' he said in a calm tone, getting up.

''What the hell are you talking about?'' (Y/n) made a fist. Was he really here to just tease her, to make her look like a fool so he could tell his stupid jock buddies. How dare he...... She turn away, trying to hold back the tears.

She didn't noticed a pair of strong arm around her. ''...(Y/n).... ,'' Al voice was deep, making her blush. ''I was talking about you.''

Upon hearing this, she blinked, turning her full attention towards him; looking into those eyes made her blush even more. Why must the 'hero' have a affect on her. ''A-Alfred....''
Alfred lightly smiled, caressing her cheek loving.

''Ever the first day I meet you, I knew you were the one,'' he said, looking into her (your color eyes). ''I knew you were different from the other girls; (Y/n) please don't think I'm some jock who really wants one thing,'' his voice soft a bit.

She was just staring at him, listening to every word. ''Please tell me, I won't judge you.''

Alfred stood quiet, this was his first time being in love, well...... he did love his hamburgers, but this love was different. Different in a good way that made his heart beat faster. Al cupped her chin, leaning to her face and whispering. ''I love you.''

(Y/n) blushed as she noticed his lips were so close to  hers.''I love--,'' she was cut off.  Their lips touched; the kiss was soft, nothing could break this romantic moment.
Alfred pull her closer, making her gently gasp at this. (Y/n) enjoy the kiss but it sorta scared her.... the feeling being in love... this was her first time being in love, but she knew that Alfred wasn't the type to lie.

They began to break the kiss, as their faces were a bit pink. ''A-Alfed,'' (Y/n) said in whispers. Lifting her hand to touch his cheek, looking into his eyes. Al smiled at her, touching her hand that was placed on his cheek.

''Yes?''

She gently pull away from the embrace, her (your eye color) swift to the couch, her gaze turn to Alfred. ''Do you want to cuddle for a while before you have to leave?'' she asked him.

Alfred just chuckled. ''Sure.''
Once he was laying on the couch as well, he held her close. (Y/n) gently nuzzled him, placing a hand on his beating heart.

(Y/n) was look, listening to the sound of Alfred's heart. ''Hey Alfred, c-can I tell you something?'' she looked up a bit.

Alfred nodded, still holding on to her. She was quiet.
She didn't know if she had the guts to tell him that she original that he was going to trick her, no, she wasn't going to say that! Ugh..... that will be just dumb.
(Y/n) knew in her heart that she wanted to tell him how sweet and caring he was that he loved her for her, not anyone else. She smiled at him, kissing him gently on the lips.

''Thank you, Alfred.''

Al blinked. ''For?''

''I guess for coming over and telling me how you really feel about me.'' she blinked. ''You see.... I always had a crush on you back in the ninth grade, but I was too.... um... nervous to tell you because you were popular and I knew that you would never go for a girl like me.....,'' (Y/n) said in a calm tone.

Her voice sounded so gentle... like tiny bells, but her voice..... was so sad.
Alfred noticed her eyes getting all watery, he gently wipe her tears away. (Y/n) blinked, not noticing why he did that.

''Don't cry, princess,'' he whisper, holding her tight.
'I-I'm crying.....?'' she thought gently touching her wet cheek; then she remember why she was crying, because of that ugly feeling that she had.

Thinking that Alfred was going to use and make fun of her after that, but no.
(Y/n) looked at him, gently take off his classes. ''I love you Alfred.''

Alfred lean closer to her face, and replied back with, ''I love you too.'' Their touched, but this time the kiss wasn't as soft like the first time letting the night off with a sweet bliss.
*xx*

The next morning came, the of them were fast asleep on the couch. Alfred slowly began to open his eyes as he felt the sun shine against his face. He groan at this, how he hated morning . he shield his eyes from the sun.

''Damn sun....,'' he mumbled as he tried to sit up but felt something. He swift his eyes down to see(Y/n) sleeping near him.

He blushed to remember to what happen; his cheeks were so red that he never that the kiss was going to be that far. At least, they were good kids so they knew when to control themselves; he gently kissed (Y/n)'s cheek.

Al was a little worry that he woke (Y/n) up because she slightly move in her sleep.
He took a calm breath, he sat a bit turning his head to see his glasses on the coffee table.

He reached for them, as he grab them he put them on and blinked a few them before hearing a soft gentle voice. ''How did you sleep?''
Alfred turn his attention to her and smiled, giving her a peck on the lips. ''I slept good, but I think I arm fell asleep though,'' he grin.

(Y/n) couldn't hope but smiled at him.
''Hey Al?''

''Yeah?''

She gave him a warm smile. ''Would you like to help me to make breakfast?'''

''I would like that, after all you are my princess.''
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Comments: 56

Whitedragon421 [2013-09-22 01:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Why does this not happen in real life?

WHYYY?

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to Whitedragon421 [2013-09-22 01:18:08 +0000 UTC]

I dunno know!  DX

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Yukatono1 [2013-08-08 05:19:04 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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Anamanga13 [2013-07-20 12:39:34 +0000 UTC]

that was such a good story!

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KyokoLovesPocky [2013-06-27 22:50:36 +0000 UTC]

This story was....*sniffs* so touching....If my someone i liked did something like that I would faint....
Keep writing these type of stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to KyokoLovesPocky [2013-06-27 22:56:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks, but i felt like this sotry wasn't that good to the requester.

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KyokoLovesPocky In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-27 23:42:22 +0000 UTC]

But it was! >

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to KyokoLovesPocky [2013-06-28 01:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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KyokoLovesPocky In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-29 01:20:10 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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SierranquillaSSJ [2013-06-25 06:41:30 +0000 UTC]

This story was amazing! There were some grammatical errors and you used the wrong word in some places, but other than that, it was a really well-written story. . . I WISH MY CRUSH WOULD CONFESS TO ME LIKE THAT!!!

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SofiaWerewolf [2013-06-25 04:24:39 +0000 UTC]

NICE! This is your first story? DANG! You have a gift!

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to SofiaWerewolf [2013-06-25 04:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Not my first this my first country x reader.

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dreedree30 [2013-06-25 02:31:00 +0000 UTC]

i loved the story it was so cute

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Piri-tanyay [2013-06-25 02:10:10 +0000 UTC]

I loved reading this!!! It's very sweet.

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bleach116607 [2013-06-25 02:07:10 +0000 UTC]

This was your first time ??? Really???? You are a really good writer. Very good job

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SlifofinaDragon [2013-06-25 00:45:50 +0000 UTC]

i loved it just like your last one on fanfiction

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to SlifofinaDragon [2013-06-25 07:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you sweetie. ^^
I might write more fic with the 2p because I remember you loved that story I made~. ^.^

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SlifofinaDragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-25 11:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep I did and the request of my 2p I can't wait to see

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to SlifofinaDragon [2013-06-25 20:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes of course. ^^ thank you for your patients,.I promise I will read it.

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SlifofinaDragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-25 20:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome and I can't wait

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to SlifofinaDragon [2013-06-25 22:59:20 +0000 UTC]

^.^

And I'm sorry to trouble you but give you me details for your request please. ^^ like the plot and stuff. i know yu wanted 2pamerica x oc (i would write a resder but i don;t have to write a reader lemon.... ))

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SlifofinaDragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-25 23:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Lemon is okay with me, I love them in fact now for te plot how about

The of is coming home from school and 2P!america asked her to give a ride to his place since it was about to rain and the oc knew that she wouldn't make it back home in time and accepts 2P!america's offer.

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to SlifofinaDragon [2013-06-25 23:15:01 +0000 UTC]

alright and how does your oc look like? and her name please. ^^

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SlifofinaDragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-26 00:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Fina short from my username, since not a people that I know can pronounce that whole name for how the Fina to look blond short hair to her shoulder, hazel brown eyes, for what she wears you can choose on that

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to SlifofinaDragon [2013-06-26 17:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Aww she's sounds really pretty. Alright I start on it.

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SlifofinaDragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-26 18:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Okay thank you

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Shizl3MahSh00mz [2013-06-25 00:17:33 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Altofox, I believe you have a very good concept to work with, but again read over your work a couple of times. You could also read about a certain character if your worried about it being to Oc. But besides all that its very sweet. ^^

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Altofox [2013-06-24 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty good for your first reader insert story, I'm proud of you! you had some spelling and grammar mistakes that made the story a bit confusing at times though. I don't know if you do or not but you should always read over your story over again at least two or three times before uploading it to make sure your story doesn't have any mistakes in it. But all in all this was great, so good job!

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to Altofox [2013-06-24 21:58:23 +0000 UTC]

I do but like said, I.feel.comfortable witj oc...... .-. I think I might re-write.

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Altofox In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-24 23:07:20 +0000 UTC]

I understand that, and that's alright! if you feel you'd like to rewrite though, then go ahead~! There should be nothing wrong with that ^^ I can even help you with spelling and grammar and such if you'd like

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sukicherri [2013-06-24 21:19:02 +0000 UTC]

I like it

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to sukicherri [2013-06-24 21:19:38 +0000 UTC]

really? Oh thanks.

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sukicherri In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-24 21:22:46 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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riverdarkness [2013-06-24 20:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to riverdarkness [2013-06-24 20:41:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks. And Sorry, Im not good at writing readers, and thanks the advice though

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riverdarkness In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-24 21:10:05 +0000 UTC]

it's okay and no need to be sorry it's your first insert there was going to be little errors here and there, and np i only spotted those things because i read so many inserts.

take a look a the only reader insert in my gallery, it's not the best well alot can be improved upon.

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xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-24 20:33:43 +0000 UTC]

and thanks

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-24 20:38:07 +0000 UTC]

your welcome. you don't seem to happy about it.

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xbloodrosedragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-24 20:45:56 +0000 UTC]

i am

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-24 20:51:39 +0000 UTC]

thats good, I thought you weren't happy about the story... .-.

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xbloodrosedragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-24 20:54:58 +0000 UTC]

nah

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-24 21:16:03 +0000 UTC]

well Im glad you enjoy it.

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xbloodrosedragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-24 21:17:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-24 22:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh would you like to.enter my contest?

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xbloodrosedragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-25 00:22:44 +0000 UTC]

mAybe

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-25 05:48:39 +0000 UTC]

oh isee...

Oh you aren't going to fave it

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xbloodrosedragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-25 05:52:02 +0000 UTC]

i dont usually fave stories they have to be super amazing for that

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-25 05:54:35 +0000 UTC]

awww...... Now I feel like this story was a waste....... it was super amazing like the other T.T

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xbloodrosedragon In reply to thebigblackdevil5 [2013-06-25 06:00:42 +0000 UTC]

honey, 98% of the stories i read, no matter how good, dont get favorited by me....im just super picky. its a cute story

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thebigblackdevil5 In reply to xbloodrosedragon [2013-06-25 06:04:06 +0000 UTC]

oh okay. Thanks for telling me the truth. ^^ I'm not mad though.

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