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Published: 2015-05-15 14:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 737; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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So here's a much better rendition of my new fakemon/fusion (Eeveettata) character, and I also wanted to try out a new expression since it seems like I do smiles 99% of the time (not that that's bad, but I just wanted to draw something a little different). Here's a little snapshot of what I have planned for the beginning of chapter 1 of my still-unnamed story, where the plot will really start to kick-off. This story won't be anywhere near as dark as "What Will it Take?" but will still have some peril in it. Though Robert is falling here, he obviously survives because it's barely chapter 1 and he's the protagonist
I might start writing the prologue today or tomorrow; that still remains to be seen. My biggest mistake with the prologue for WWIT? was that it got too heavy too fast. The prologue I have planned for this will be much lighter and I will attempt to do a better job at establishing the setting and characters. The heavier stuff won't start happening until chapter 1.
Update 5/16/15 - The story will be called, "The Little Artist."
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Despite he's falling, he still looks cute. I actually imagined Hope as a luxray seeing him and using her ice to form soft powdery snow where he hits the ground, but it's your story. I just have a very active imagination.
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While we're at it, let's do a little RP with this character
Robert: *tries to use his cape as a parachute, but it fails, and now he's a mere 100 feet from the ground!*
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Oh, okay, but it will probably be short.
*Hope, an ice luxray, was walking along when she saw someone falling from a great height. She ran over to where they were going to fall and used her abilities to form a very large pile of soft, powdery snow beneath them.*
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(Yeah, probably just a few lines of dialogue will be enough. I've also decided on a name for the story. It'll be called, "The Little Artist.")
Robert: *plummets feet-first into the snow, and he is unscathed*
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(Hope approaches Robert.* "You okay?" *She speaks with a gentle voice.*
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Robert lies down on the snow, unable to speak at first. He eventually speaks
Robert: y-yes... *breathing hard*
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"Here, let's get you out of the snow." *Hope picks Robert up and places him on her back.* "Don't want you catch a cold." *She begins walking to a nearby village.*
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Robert: *still catching his breath* Th-thank you, Miss Luxray, you're so kind.
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"You're welcome. My name is Hope. What's yours?"
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Robert: I'm Robert. I like your name Miss Hope ^.^
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"Thank you, and just Hope is fine."
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Robert: okay. Sorry Hope *still sounds sad*
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*Hope notices Robert's tone of voice.* "What's wrong?"
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Robert: I was just separated from my family...
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"I'm sorry, but I'm sure that you'll find them again. I'll even help you."
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Robert; Well, they're going south right now to a warmer climate. What direction are we going?
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"West, but only a quarter mile from where you landed. So you're not far off."
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Robert: Okay. I hope my family doesn't think I'm dead; maybe there's a bird Pokemon there that'll take me to them, or at least find them and deliver a note for me so I can tell them I'm okay.
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"I'm sure there's a bird pokemon in town, so don't worry...Don't lose hope." *Hope giggles.*
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Robert: *laughs* I won't ^.^
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*Hope gets into town and looks for a bird pokemon willing to help Robert. She soon finds a female talonflame.* "Excuse me. I hate to bother but Robert needs some help from a flying pokemon."
Talonaflame: "Of course! How can help you, Robert?"
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Robert: H-hi Miss Talonflame. If it's not too much a bother, can you take me to my family, please? I have a brother who's also an Eeveettata, and my parents are Umbrecates.
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Robert: They're at the top part of the cliff, and they're going south.
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"Alright, hop on. I'll take you." *The talonflame lowered herself so Robert could get on.*
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Robert: *gets on Talonflame and holds on*
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Hope: "Wait!" *Gives Robert a hug.* "Good luck, Robert."
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Robert: *hugs back* Thanks for helping me Hope, I hope we see each other again ^.^
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Hope: "Yeah, me too."
Talonflame: "Here we go!" *Takes off and quickly climbs above the ciff which Robert fell from. She climbs well above it to get a good view.* "Do you see them?"
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Robert: *scared at first to look down, but works up his courage and looks* There way over there!
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*Talonflame looks where Robert's pointing and sees a small group of pokemon. She flies down to them and lands in front of them.*
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Robert's mom: *scared at first, not seeing Robert right away*
Robert's dad: Robert!
Robert: Mom! Dad!
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(Do you want to continue a little further or are you content with that?)
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Robert: *Reunites with family*
The End!
(Yeah that's it ^.^ Obviously the story won't have it that easy on Robert, but it was nice to get a sense of writing for him. Thanks ^.^ )
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Thank you ^.^ He'll land safely of course (it'll involve his cape
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Yeah, I already know. ^_^
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Can't wait for the story. (Did you already write another story?)
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Yeah, but it flopped :/
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A small frame, such as likely on an Eeveeatta (Eevatta? Eeveeta?), would actually be a benefit when falling. Force = Mass * Acceleration, therefore, given the same acceleration(Approximately 6.1 G in Earth gravity), an object with less mass will fall with less force, and impact with lower mechanical stress, which would hopefully be less painful.
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It would, except that fall is hundreds of feet and there's a hard layer of snow at the bottom. His cape will come into play though
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Hard snow is still a better landing-spot than hard water. The snow can be displaced by the fall, slowing our poor Eeveeatta in a matter similar to how an aramid vest stops bullets, while liquid water has too much surface tension(Please, if your hero must land in a pool of water, make it supercritical).
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Well, what my Eeveettata character is going to do is use his cape as a parachute and make the landing much softer that way.
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Hey! Then he'd be a flying squirrel! lol Sorry, I had to. XD
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I know, I'm just showing off my obscure, half-understood physics knowledge ;D
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