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Description Meat, its what i've become, everyday someone new. get your kicks, just feed me lies. make your choice, the options are open, i'll find love in my minds eye. This bed becomes our loving home, your grunts, whispered i loves you's, yes i can pretend to be whole. All you want is what i offer, but please just fake concern, it makes it easier to play this role. Someday the disease will take over, claiming its players. by then i will be so far gone, i wont need love. Take and give, need and want. More than what most can bear, not a game for a shivering dove. Love those while you can, while they can be loved. Need grows too big, it kills when left untended....
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Comments: 24

Dysph0ria [2003-10-23 04:21:20 +0000 UTC]

You're very much welcome.

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thecorr In reply to Dysph0ria [2003-10-24 00:10:47 +0000 UTC]

*smile*

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Dysph0ria [2003-10-22 04:20:07 +0000 UTC]

It's nice.

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thecorr In reply to Dysph0ria [2003-10-23 00:47:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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contaminatedwata [2003-10-21 21:32:59 +0000 UTC]

aww you're fine. i'll let you know if there's something especially bad. this one didn't distract me. it's more the spelling errors that i don't like.

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thecorr In reply to contaminatedwata [2003-10-21 23:25:07 +0000 UTC]

those drive me insane as well (lol i think i spelled that wrong...-.-) anywho...thankies!!

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contaminatedwata [2003-10-19 22:47:17 +0000 UTC]

grammatical errors... porr corr. it can be distracting at times, but yours weren't nearly as bad as many people i know. good job. you can see your emotion flowing through this. i love you!

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thecorr In reply to contaminatedwata [2003-10-19 22:54:26 +0000 UTC]

aww thankies!!!! i know im awful...the sad part is i cant really find them...help me please? (send it in a note..if you do help) I LOVE YOU!!!

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johnhawks [2003-10-07 06:54:36 +0000 UTC]

As seekingtruth said, I was a very little bit distracted by the grammer. (*" HEIL!" said the grammer Nazi*) But aside from that, something about the ending just pulls the heart strings. You have captured the emotion perfectly. I salute you!

-J Hawks

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thecorr In reply to johnhawks [2003-10-07 17:53:00 +0000 UTC]

lol! yeah...again..i suck at grammar...i'll revise it here in a bit when i get some time. thank you so much! coming from such a good writer as yourself..that really means alot to me!

_Corr

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goatstack [2003-10-06 15:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice work Corrie !! Its as if you wrote your very thoughts on paper. Your very emotion. As some guy probably said a long time ago - "Aw-inspiring".

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thecorr In reply to goatstack [2003-10-06 17:40:36 +0000 UTC]

*smile* thank you so much Aaron...for the fav and the comment. you rock!

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seekingtruth [2003-10-06 08:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Critically, the mising apostrophes bothered me, but I can be a grammar nazi at times.

Doesn't take away from the piece itself, tho. Very nice

Lachrymology, ey? Interesting... lachrymose=tearful, I know, but... is it really a science? Pah! Look at me- commenting on other people's comments when I should be focusing on the piece itself... I'm so dumb

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thecorr In reply to seekingtruth [2003-10-06 17:42:12 +0000 UTC]

lol...yes i stink at grammar...i understand how it can be distracting...but anyway, thank you for the comment!

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v [2003-10-05 20:43:04 +0000 UTC]

I really like the wording in this!! It shows how someone can be too dependant on something!

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thecorr In reply to v [2003-10-05 22:20:01 +0000 UTC]

!!exactly!! thank you so much for the nice comment!

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catnipmouse [2003-10-05 11:53:31 +0000 UTC]

I love it corr *hugs on you and gives you eskimo kisses*

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thecorr In reply to catnipmouse [2003-10-05 15:22:49 +0000 UTC]

lol im glad you like it hon *kissies!*

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unheard-voice [2003-10-05 04:07:15 +0000 UTC]

*nods* nicely done. you put ALOT of emotion into this. very srong writing, keep it up

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thecorr In reply to unheard-voice [2003-10-05 04:09:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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boxofslavery [2003-10-05 03:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Damn man, everyone's felt that way, but you really make it interesting to read about. great job..hope it made ya feel better

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thecorr In reply to boxofslavery [2003-10-05 04:03:07 +0000 UTC]

*smile* thank you so much for the kind comment...it did feel good to get it out

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thecorr In reply to thecorr [2003-10-05 04:12:38 +0000 UTC]

whoa..never heard that word before..but, i do it alot lol

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boxofslavery In reply to thecorr [2003-10-05 04:08:36 +0000 UTC]

lachrymology = the science of using crying as a therapy

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