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Published: 2004-04-06 23:04:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 23; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Anothe rTFF piece, kinda wishin' she'd get her own account, she's gettin' more reviews than me
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^^ You poetry is nice but I've noticed that you've been using in some parts the repeating verse thing (like a chorus) in your style. use it. but dont over use it..Im afraid people MIGHT get tired about it..^^ dont take it hard nah~~
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It's ok I appreciate the advice actually ((hard to find someone who'll doa proper critique)) but truth is, mos tof what I rite turns into music. My friends and I are major finale addicts, we've finnaly finnishes the music to My Muse Fweeeee! Anyways... bah. What was I saying? Oh yes, hamster, they're these little rat lookin' things...
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I see ^^ I hope someday your poetry can become music
Most of the music these are all about men and women *dies*
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Eh, I don't listen to contemporary music much, it's kinda obscene. I listen to Eighties and a lot of Evanescence, which it why some of the stuff i write is kinda odd
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EVANESCENCE YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like "bring me to life" "my immortal" and "lies" the best ^^
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ohhh I LOVE lies! and Breathe no more ^-^ My Last Breath, Breathe no More and Whisper are my favs ^-^
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xDDDDDDDD ah heck I LIKE THEM ALL xDDD wheeee~~
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