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Published: 2012-04-18 21:10:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1901; Favourites: 113; Downloads: 12
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I wanted to draw something kawaii.Kawaii helps with my art blocks :I
My character Azusa. I mostly made her to model clothes on.
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I apologize in advance for my lousy critique, I've never done it before so I hope you can find some semblance of value in my ramblings.
Despite this being 'kawaii desu', it's still an amazing work. I adore the soft coloring, and the composition is fantastic. I personally love it when the main focus of a piece comes out of the border; it adds interest to the picture.
The anatomy is pretty spot on, I obviously don't need to touch on it much. However, her right hand bothers me a little bit. I think it's because the fingers are sinking into the wrapper and I sort of expected them to be shaded more prominently after the proximal phalanges end.
Her clothing design, and the folds, are great. I totally suck at both, so all of your work astounds me in that aspect. I am noticing, though, that the boots are of relatively uneven lengths. Her left leg is bent at a larger angle and goes back further than her right, but the boots are still the same height. If both legs were in the same position, then her left boot would be longer. Hopefully I'm making sense here. orz
I've heard that critique sandwiches aren't necessary, but I would like to end on a positive simply because I believe this is a really fantastic drawing. It's very vibrant and despite the delicious looking food in the background, Azusa is still the center of attention without actually having to be in the center.
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Thank you very much!
Yea, pretty much everything you pointed out I can totally see, like with her boots. I even noticed that when I was coloring then forgot till you mentioned it '_'
Thank you!
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Oh man, I totally didn't mean to remind you. I hate that feeling so much.
But I'm glad what I said wasn't totally useless!
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It's a critique, dude, that's what you're supposed to do XD So thanks!
Nah, no way. I'm just glad I actually got a critique! And a good one is hard to come by, so I appreciate it~
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Pfft, I s'pose that's true. I have an inferiority complex like no other so I rarely share my thoughts like that. ;w;
Oh wow, it's really no problem! I know that I like getting real feedback on my stuff, so now that I can critique without a sub I'll try and do it more often.
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I've had a similar problem .__.
But yea, I'll look forward to it!
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Awesome!! I love that she's not... anorexic. XD Your coloring is so amazing!!
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I prefer drawing more realistic bodied girls :'D
And thank you!
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bwaahh--That's some neat design bro That theme's really cute ^ 7 ^
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Oh wow! I really like her dress and her hair! What a cute character. Nice boots as well. I'm impressed with the illusion of depth in this piece. Nice work.
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Thank you!
What a nice thing to say 8) I appreciate it.
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love how this pic comes together.
great work, I dig the outfit.
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BUT CHU WILL CHILD! <333 Yo creativity shall shine
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There are other more creative entries than mine though!
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well then yours is just as good as theres!
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I don't really find this "kawaii", but I do think it's very beautiful and I'm jelly of your skills bro ;o;
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Yea, it doesn't really have enough desu to be kawaii, I suppose.
But thanks, even though I don't see why you would be ;A;
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OH MY GOODNESS!!! :'///D
Th-this is AMAZING!!! Like, everything! Are those crepes?? I seriously LOVE her fashion! And her hair, and everything :'D I want her clothes lol~
I seriously love this! I am so honored you entered my contest :') <33333
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I'm really glad you like it!
I'm gonna type up some info on her too later, okay?
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Okay, sounds good! : )
I'm really looking forward to read it!
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KAWAIIIII
//shot//
naw, but i love your art.
i love how you're so......so....international? I fear thats not the word - but i suck at engrish orz
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Thanks! Never heard that before 8D
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Maybe thats because my wording was wrong? Orz
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Nah, nah, I understood! It was just a unique compliment, is all. I liked it!
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