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TheDarkBladeHuntress — 2012 Contest: Nai'ja

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Description FINALLY DONE!!! so, here for the contest of design a female yautja OC i have created mine whom i names Nai'ja and she is Luar-Ke-Sain'ja's older sister. I think i came out very good used paint.net and the Gimp but sadly the gimp is being a butthead and wont let me post up the gimp version of Nai'ja which looks alot better than this one, but oh well this one looks cool ^-^ and sorry for the really long bio of her since this is a contest i wanted to add as much detail as possible and i think the story turned out kindov cheesy cuz for one i hate typing so much, not a big fan of litterature and wanted to get it done and over with. And yes the story is kindov adult rated but the pict is not so, yea. Well, hope u guys enjoy and what not ^-^ Plus i did not add a background since bg's are not my thing...dont like making them.


Name: Nai'ja
Meaning of Name: Worship
Age: 420 (30 in human)
Sex: Female
Race: Yautja, Hish
Born: June 16th
Zodiac: Gemini
Rank: Warrior, Captain
Clan: Silent Stalkers
Height: 8ft
Weight: 193 lbs (mainly muscle, little body fat)
Language: Yautja


Dreadlock Color: Black with brown tints on the ends of them
Dreadlock Ringlet Color: None
Dreadlock Length: Very short, but one comes past her shoulder and the other past her breast
Eye Color: Amber with a tint of light green
Skin Color: Medium colored peach covering her legs, stomach, breasts and some of her chest and some parts of her face while the darker coloring covers her arms, her sides and back and parts of her face.


Injuries/Markings: Burned with the blood of the xenomorph when she became a young blood, her clan symbol on her right arm, a scar in the middle of her right hand where as a pup, a blade went through when she was fighting another young female her age.
Weapons of Choice: Toxic Wristblades that are infused with a special flesh eating acid can burn through and eat tissue in a matter of seconds (which lets say if Nai'ja cuts off an arm with the toxin present, the acid will very quickly eat through the remaining tissue, including bone, until the entire body is no longer, and it only takes 1 drop to do so) but the acid is not as powerful to burn through the wristblades to where its contained. She never uses this unless its neccissary. She also carries a sword that was once her grandfathers and has been in her family ever since. Plus with the toxin in her wrist blades, she can also smear it on the blade of the sword as well making it much more easier to kill an enemy.


Personality: Sarcastic, Adventurous, Charming, Confident, Impatient, Courageous, Lively.


Likes: Her twin pups, Exploring the galaxy, Hunting big game (but she knows she is not suppose to hunt since females are forbidden, but she does it anyways which makes that more fun. But now having twins to raise, she barely has time for it), Communicating with other yautja.

Dislikes: The father of her twins, Seeing ones she loves hurt, Laziness, Being ignored, Badbloods, Un-Successful hunts.


Family/Relationships:
Mother: Ju'nia-chi
Father: Dachande
Sister(s): Luar-Ke-Sain'ja
Brother(s): Unknown..yet
Pups: Mei-jadhi (daughter), Mei'hswe (son)
Mate: None

Story: Nai'ja was born into the Silent Stalkers. This clan, reason for the name is because on a hunt they always would come up from behind their prey and kill them that way, they would rarely come from in front. The clan is more farther from any other clans territories in yautja prime because they are a very independent clan and would prefer to keep their clan bloodline in tact (means no mating with anyone outside the clan) and do not like other clan members to enter into the territory, unless it is a yautja who is at high enough rank and honor and very well known. The environment is much like the other clans, very hot with anchient buildings and tall structures with plenty of high technology, plus food and water. The mother of Nai'ja, Ju'nia-chi grew up with her mother and 3 younger sisters and her father sadly died on a hunt. Then later on in her life when she reached her early adolescent years, her mother was cast out of the clan for killing another female around her age due to a fit of anger.
Now leaving Ju'nia-chi to raise her 3 younger sisters alone and with no help from the other clans females because it was her mother and her sisters mother that was cast out. Now, going through her adolescent years raising her sisters alone was very difficult, she had to learn quickly on how to become a mother and she gave up almost everything just to keep her younger sisters fed and she was constantly judged by others on how she is the daughter of a bad blood mother and her father was a coward on the hunt, and in return he died for being such a coward and she will never keep her sisters alive, since she is too young and was never taught on how to become a mother by her own mother or other females of the clan like most young females her age.

Now finally an adult, Ju'nia-chi managed to shock almost everyone on how she managed to regain some honor back to her family by managing to raise 2 of her young sisters to late adolescent, give her sisters a chance to watch for themselves but she still has her youngest sister to raise and she is now at late age of her childhood. Then one day, the clan needed more weaponry so they invited the Dark Blade clan to their territory for trading since the Dark Blade clan has the better weapons than any clan on the planet. So, the Dark Blade came into the territory headed by the well known Dachande with an abunded amount of weapons and the elder from the Silent Stalkers also traded with the Dark Blade with a few of their things. But, Dachande made a decision to stay for a while since his ship has been slightly damaged and the clan does not want to risk going back home in its condition.

So, the elder of the Silent Stalkers accepted and gave the Dark Blade clan as much time as they needed to relax and repair the ship but the rest of the clan was not at all comfortable with other members of a diffrent clan staying in their territory and was given the luxury of staying for as long as they like and the whole fact that their own elder has accepted them was quite a shock. So, as the days went on the Dark Blades ship was on its way to being fully repaired and Ju'nia-chi and the rest of the clan was on edge since they never had anybody from a diffrent clan step foot into the territory and secondly they seem a bit too comfortable as well plus some of the righer ranking males are being too close to the clans females but Dachande stops them since knowing that the clan does not allow mingiling with other clan members. But Dachande does break that rule when he spots a female with a young pup walking by her side and that is Ju'nia-chi. He introduces himself to her, and immediatly notices that the young pup did not come from her and is immediatly turned on by the fact that she is raising a female pup that is not hers and being so loving to it plus being quite healthy for her age and beautiful appearance to her as well.

So that night he decides to mate with her but of course the clan is upset with it and same with the elder but there is really nothing he can do since Dachande is so well known, a living legend and now realizing it that it would be quite an honor which a suckling is born into the clan that was produced by him giving the clan a higher notice. So, Dachande seduces Ju'nia-chi though he did have some trouble in laying with her since she didnt want to become pregnant and raise it, since she is already having trouble raising her sister but he manages to and she concieves. A few days later, the ship is fully repaired and the Dark Blade clan leaves.

Now pregnant, Ju'nia-chi has never been more pampered and noticed in her life and in fact the clan has been more around her then ever making sure the pregnancy is healthy and the suckling is developing fine and when it came to the time where she gave birth, the birth was perfect and the suckling came out healthy and looking at her little one Ju'nia-chi with alot of pride and love she gave the suckling her grandmothers name, Nai'ja.


Nai'ja growing up was much loved, since being the daughter of Dachade she was much privilaged and spoiled by the clan and of course her mothers and aunts. She was the type of pup to get into trouble and gets enjoyment from it and she, since she was able to walk, she was always seaking some sort of adventure. She was the type, and still is, that she will not take shit from no one. When she was in her late childhood a group of middle class young females around her age were secretly talking about her even so that she can even hear what they were saying, especially one young female who was giggling and looking straight at her, then at her peers.

Nai'ja couldent take it anymore and ran after the young female and punched her in the face then the two began to wrestle on the ground punching and biting eachother while the other two females ran off and it got to the poing where the young female took a small blade and while Nai'ja was pinned to the ground she stabbed her in her hand so hard that the blade went right into the ground making Nai'ja's hand stuck to the ground. Nai'ja at that point was screaming in pain and now frightened the young female ran off and what seemed like an eternity to Nai'ja a few adult females came to the rescue and removed the blade from her hand and took her to get medical treatment.

And while they were tending to her injured hand she told them who stabbed her and the young female was then punished and later on Nai'ja's hand was completely healed but left a nasty scar as well. Going through her adolescent years, Nai'ja was still in her meschivious and adventurous ways and she wanted to be like the males in her clan, to be able to hunt and taste the thrill of it and to gain honor as they did but sadly, knowing that she is a female of her species and all that is expected of them is to stay at home and learn how to become mothers.

Nai'ja does not want that, in fact she does not want any sucklings to raise since she does not like them for all they do is feed, cry and poop and to her she does not have time for that. Now at the age of discovering her own identity, she realizes that she does not like who she is and she thinks that she is suppose to be a male for she is not like most of the females in her clan all they do is just talk amungst themselves and are with younger pups in training and they make cloth and pottery and are chased around by young males who have yet to become hunters while Nai'ja would train secretly pretending she was killing Kainde Amedha and Oomans pretending to rip out their spines from their bodies.

She at times when she was developing breasts would try to prevent them from growing by taping her chest as tight as she could and would leave it on all day. And she absolutly hated it when it came to the time she started her menstral cycle and would prey to the goddess for it to stop. By the time her mother really began to worry about her and gave her a lecture and she stopped putting the tape on her breasts and just gave up, realizing that she is a female and there is nothing she can do about it. Then a day came when the males in her clan came for mating season but since still being an adolescent she is not yet allowed to so just like the rest of the younger clan members they are separated to another part of the territory for safety and protection of their chasity.

But, with Nai'ja being whom she is decides to discover what is going on over there and to see if she can sneek onto the clans ship, the one ship that is home to all the hunting males in the clan, the ship that has roamed so much of the galaxy that she has dreamed of exploring plus holding hundreds of well earned trophies. So in the middle of the night while everyone was asleep, silently Nai'ja went over with a blade in her hand just in case and started heading for the ship.

Now at the ship she very quietly sneeks in, managing to sneek past the guards and ends up in the trophy room and immediatly is astounded and amazed at the trophies noticing how big they are and so many of them and as she was about to touch one of the trophies she resisted knowing that if she did she would leave a print and would eventually get caught. She now heads out of the trophy room and explores the rest of the ship and being very careful of not getting caught. She then ends up in the main control room of the ship and walks towards the controlls and so badly wanting to touch a few buttons or to at least fly it but again resists.

And as she was about to leave, she turns and bumps into a young male who is at least 20 years older than she is just standing there with his arms crossed asking her what she was doing there and she replies she was curious about wanting to go into the clans mothership since she has never been there before and always wanted to investiage it. And now realizing that she has been caught, she begged him not to tell anyone that she has been on the ship since of course adolescent females and female pups are forbidden. He then tells her that her secret is safe with him unless she does something for him, he tells her that for some reason he was always wanted to see a full female nude before him and always wanted to feel her genitalia to see what is so special about it and how can great warriors from the past and the future can come from it.

Plus, he was also quite upset that he has to wait for next mating season to come because he is still too young and has not reached that rank yet. So, she agrees and takes off her loin cloth infront of him and she nervously sits down in the chair and spreading her legs a little bit and he kneels down eye level with her and gently places his fingers on her genitals and now looking down at it with such fasination in his eyes spreading her labia while purring in satisfaction and shes does the same except now she is experiencing a feeling that she has never felt before as he is touching her down there. First her heart starts beating a little faster, her body temperature rises feeling more hot than normal and she can feel her heart is beating down there as well.

Now as he puts his finger in, all these symptoms seem to rise more and she cant help but to enjoy the feeling, the greatest feeling that she has ever had in her life and looking down at him she could tell that he was really enjoying it. Now fully relaxed and closes her eyes, letting the pleasure overpower her and now before she knows it he starts to get ontop of her and can litteraly feeling his eraction touching her and quickly she tries to get him off of her but he resists and tries to pin her down to the chair with his body weight while his hands spreads her legs appart for easy access and before he tries to enter her she knees him right in the groin and pushes him off of her while now he is on the ground holding his groin in pain while she takes off, grabbing her loin cloth and runs out of the room and out of the ship.

Later on she does get into trouble when one of the older males discovers the mating musk that she produced and he asked her who tried to mate with her, but she did not give him the name or discription of him since he kept his promise and she decides that she will not get him into trouble as well.

Now as an adult she now has gained enough honor to spare her family name since she had saved the life of a great warrior on a dangerous hunt because normally on a hunt their species would just leave the dying brother because there is nothing he could do, but she just did not think of herself and risked her life saving him plus a thing she did not know was that he was one of the sons of the elder so that gave her extra points as well.

Though, she later on was punished for sneeking on board, disguising herself as a male by bounding down her breasts again(though it was much harder since her breasts have gotten a hell of alot bigger) and wore a chest plate the entire time plus stayed away from the other males as best as she could just in case she came into heat and they would surely figure out she is a female.

In the ship, even though she was in constant discomfort, was living her dream and goal in life to see the galaxy and all the stars and moons and planets and was constantly at the ships windows looking out which gave the elder a good chuckle as seeing her with such fasination at looking out, but was getting suspisious right away that he has never heard of him or that he is far too skinny to be a healthy male and it is clear that he has never trained to gain muscle or been to his first blooded hunt.

So, even though concerned he ignores it which of course is a huge relief for her but there is one young male who is much more curious of her, and this male is the same one that has touched her long ago but she never got him into trouble, since making the deal with him. He even tried to test her when in training, they had a dojo and each of them, except for the elder, were to fight. As the fight went on, the young male which she finds out his name is Thewi Tjau'ke and in each and every fight with his clan brothers, he always stood the champion which of course pleases the elder.

And the thing she notices as he was fighting was that he fights with such brutality he even accidently took an arm off of one of the clan brothers which made her very nervous since she knew her fight was coming and was never trained into fighting, he was of course much bigger than she was not in height but in strength but the whole fact that it had to be Thewi Tjau'ke at the end to fight her and the whole time wishing that she could fight someone else, but no no one could beat him and she knew that Thewi Tjau'ke was saving her for last.

Then when it was her turn, her heart was racing and for about 6 seconds she resisted in go in the ring but she held her breath and went in now facing him and she exhailed that breath with her fists ready and Thewi Tjau'ke can see in her eyes that it was pure fear and he loved that fact but at the same time admired her for her courage. As the fight began she felt an intense pain in her face as he punched her which made her fall backwards and land on the ground.

As the crowd roars in excitement and Thewi Tjau'ke with his arms up and roaring back with victory, Nai'ja with her left foot to the ground and her right leg swinging and kicks him hard in the face and now completly amazed that she actually did that move and was the first person to actually nail Thewi Tjau'ke right in the face and wound him there to. Now full of pride and hearing the roar of the crowd, Nai'ja now feels that she can do anything and now fully pumped looking at her apponent and he looks at her with astonishment and anger thinking how can someone so thin could have easily nailed him in the face.

As he charges towards her she stands her ground and as he was about to hit her she dodges out of the way with a big grin on her face as he lands his body against the sides of the ring and she is right behind him waiting. Now really angry, he turns around and roars at her and cracking his knuckles while her fists are still up and now showing no fear she screams for him to come towards her and hit her, telling him to show her what he gots and then he says the same thing to her but now insulting her calling her a coward and how pathetic she is and by that time, she becamse furious and she ran right towards him, jumped on him and bit him right in the neck as hard as she could and as he was howling in pain trying to get her off of him, she would not at all let go and held on still biting him and then he punched her as hard as he could right in the head and she finally let go and blood was squirting right out of him, and holding his neck with his right hand trying to stop the bleeding and in complete shock he grabs a knife that he kept hidden in his right thigh and she is almost un-conshious he holds the knife right in the air about to stab her when the elder stands and roars at him, telling him the fight is over and he won.

Now the crowd was in total amazment and roaring and a few of the males came to Thewi Tjau'ke aid and helped him up and took him away from the ring to get him medical attention and a male came to Nai'ja's aid and now full un-conshious takes her away for recovery. After some days, Nai'ja finally wakes up with a massive head ach and everything seems a blur then when her vision clears she gets up now realizing that her chest plate is missing and now pure fear comes to her and as she tries to get out of bed the elder stops her and immediatly she starts appoligizing to him for coming on board and telling him about her goal and dreams of seeing what is outside of her home planet ever since she was a pup.

And listening, the elder was no at all angry or dissapointed in her in fact the admired the fact that she gave up alot just to be on board and to travel with him and the other males plus being to brave in the fight with Thewi Tjau'ke and also being another offspring of Dachande, he could not get that angry with her. And he even knew since the first day with her on board that she was female since there is no way that a male can be thin with a figure like that plus how she was acting and didnt want to be around them since most males would want the communication with one another to gain eachothers trust in case something were to happen.

But, he didnt want to say anything till the right timeing and throught the entire time talking with him all she could do was grin. Then she asked him if anyone else knew about her not being a male, he replied that the same male who came when she fell un-conshious was also a medic and the elder made him promise not to tell anyone and he said he can keep the promise. As they were talking still, the elder told her about his puphood and that she reminded him of him when he was so young and wanting the same thing but he got it more easy since of his gender and thats also another reason why he did not get so angry with her. After his story, he told her that he will train her if she approves and it will be in secret and with in a heart beat she says yes with much excitement in her voice.

When she fully recovers, the elder immeidatly starts training her and of course at first its hard but as time goes on she gets better and better and the elder is most impressed with the fact that she never gives up, no matter how badly she gets hurt or how tired she is, she never gives up. Within 2 years since being in the ship she has gained alot of muscle and it got to the point where she actually beat the elder in combat which of course was a huge boost for her and has never felt so proud of herself in her life but he makes an excuse saying that he let her beat him to make her feel good about herself, but really they both know that she bet him and he was to proud of her. Now to prove to her that he wants her to full fill her goals is that a hive of Kainde Amedha has taken over much of the planet and he wants 6 of his best warriors and her to take out the serpents and their queen and if she returns alive he will mark her in blooded class.

As she prepares for the hunt Thewi Tjau'ke would just watch her as he prepares himself for it as well, thinking that she will never survive this and just kept grinning to himself. Just before she went into her own pod to be dropped off to the planet, the elder spoke to her for a minute and gave her these wristblades that she has never seen before and at the top inside was this electric blue liquid and he told her that never to use the liquid inside, unless you really have to and he showed her where to press to release the liquid and she thanked him and went inside the pod and with the 6 hunters she was dropped in the planet.

As she went outside, switching her vision to kainde Amedha mode she was quite shocked on how much territory the serpents have tooken over and it litteraly felt like she was now inside the hive but, knew she wasnt litteraly in the hive. As the group of hunters starting to pick up the pase and trying to track down the main hive they decided to split up into teams of 2 with 3 hunters in each team. The first team will track down the hive, killing any other Kainde Amedha in their way and the other team will spit off and kill the other Kainde Amedha out there in case the serpents will feel that their queen is in danger and will come back, giving the hunters in the hive an easier chance but within a certain time the 2 teams must meet eachother at a certain area and check themelves in with one another.

Nai'ja of course gets teamed up with Thewi Tjau'ke and another young male and they head off while the 3 other males find the hive. Within 6 minutes of Nai'ja and her group start heading deeper in the territory they immediatly get confronted with Kainde Amedha warriors about 5 of them and Thewi Tjau'ke was the first one to nail one i the head with his plasma caster and Nai'ja kills her very first one with her wrist blades and they manage to keep on slaying them till all 5 of them lay dead and they keep going on.

Within a day of the hunt, with no rest or nothing to eat, Nai'ja and her group were still going strong and since the day they started the hunt they killed at least 79 Kainde Amedha and hundreds of eggs plus facehuggers even so when Nai'ja for a couple of minutes of taking off her mask a facehugger leaped towards her face but quickly Thewi Tjau'ke blasted it with his plasma cannon just in time, looking at her and just walked off.

Around the time where the groups were to check in, Thewi Tjau'ke tried to contact the 3 other males in the hive with his wrist computer but no response so, sadly they figured that the group had died so Nai'ja and her group go to find the hive. When they finally find the main hive the enter it and immediatly find Kainde Amedha bodies laying everywhere plus some of the blood of their group. And as they get deeper in the hive, they find a headless body of one of their group members and 5 feet away from the body was his head.

Nai'ja prayed for a safe journey to her fallen brother and they now continue moving and now they start slowly walking and they now hear wailing and groaning and finding out that side by side the 2 of their remaining brothers had been glued to the wall now dying with Kainde Amedha inside of them and without hesitation Thewi Tjau'ke slashes one of his brothers throat with his wrist blades and as he was about to do the same thing with his other dying brother, Nai'ja stops him and the other male keeps a watch for Kainde Amedha.

Thewi Tjau'ke now looking at Nai'ja pushes her out of the way and slashes his brothers throat and with his hand punches as hard as he could inside his brothers chests and removes the chest bursters and splits them in half. Now Thewi Tjau'ke nods at the other surviving male and they both head forward together and Nai'ja just stands there for a moment bewildered they he didnt give her dying clan brothers one last chance to say their goodbyes. So, she prays for their safe journey and runs to catch up to Thewi Tjau'ke and the other survivor.

As Nai'ja catches up she makes them stop for a moment and punches Thewi Tjau'ke in the back of his head, he then turns around and grabs her arm before she could punch him again and they roar at eachother and he asks her why did she punch him and she explains why, that he was cruel that he did not give his dying brothers a chance to say their final goodbyes and he gives his poing by saying that they are on a mission and so what if they died, at least they died with honor in trying to destroy the hive. And as they argue the other brother could not believe that they were arguing in a middle of a mission just stands there with his arms crossed and looks down shaking his head in disbelief and from behind him a Kainde Amedha slowly coming down from the wall and with its tail stabs him in the chest and he roars in pain and the Kainde Amedha climbs up the wall with the body in its tail and it gets blasted with Thewi Tjau'ke plasma castor.

And with the roar of the now fallen brother, again stirs up the hive and Nai'ja and Thewi Tjau'ke can hear hissing in the distance and now nervous they can see from their bio helmets that 20 Kainde Amedha are headed for them. So, both Nai'ja and Thewi Tjau'ke look at eachother and they both brace themselves and they run towards them and now they clash with the Kainde Amedha, now killing 3 of them and as things started to go well for them Thewi Tjau'ke gets stabbed in the arm with one of the Kainde Amedha's second mouth and Nai'ja kills it.

Now a gaping wound in his right arm the two of them move forward searching the area and again they hear hissing and whailing and within distance Thewi Tjau'ke with his plasma castor fires at them, one by one as they move against the walls towards them. But as the last Kainde Amedha was shot at and killed, the rest of them stop and retreat back. As Thewi Tjau'ke starts to move forward, Nai'ja stops him for a moment to check on his arm wound but again he moves forward.

As they move, the notice that the temperature is more humid and they both immediatly feel very uncomfortable and they hear a loud hissing, much louder than the Kainde Amedha warriors or drones put together. Nai'ja, now standing very still looks down and sees that she is surrounded by eggs and Thewi Tjau'ke as well and now observing the area can see that the area is surrounded by what seems to be thousands of eggs and now looking half way up she can see the queen Kainde Amedha and she could sense that the queen was looking right back at her. As Nai'ja places her right foot forward Thewi Tjau'ke for once stops her and now a bunch of Kainde Amedha warriors slowly come but the queen commands them not to and they retreat back.

Thewi Tjau'ke and Nai'ja can both now see that the facehuggers inside the eggs are now starting to squirm and they now start to open and Nai'ja reaching in her pack on the side of her waist takes out 2 small bombs, activates them, and throws them at the queens egg sack and within seconds it blows up and the queen now screams as Thewi Tjau'ke quickly sets off his suicide bomb and throws it and they both start to run.

As they start running out of the hive a Kainde Amedha warrior jumps on Nai'ja causing her to go down and now striggling, Nai'ja tries to push off the Kainde Amedha but before the Kainde Amedha could kill her with its second mouth, Thewi Tjau'ke blew it and now dead Nai'ja quickly pushes it off and now the acid from it quickly starts burning through her chest plate and she immediatly takes it off and throws it as the chest plate burns up and Thewi Tjau'ke grabs her hand, pulls her up and now they both start to run out.

Now fully out of the hive, they keep on running and they run till they get to a cliff and they both jump off and they land on a ledge now both hovering down while Thewi Tjau'ke holds her down even more and both can feel the planet shake as the bomb sets off. After several minutes they both get up looking at eachother and start climbing up the cliff till all they see at the top is just dust and the hive has been completly destroyed. Nai'ja slowly moves forward and Thewi Tjau'ke behind her as she looks around, making sure no Kainde Amedha have survived.

Then Thewi Tjau'ke comes up and places his hand on her shoulder and she turns to him and now feeling a breeze against her chest and now she realizes that her secret with him is now over and just as about she was about to explain the ground bursts open and the queen Kainde Amedha emerges and roars at them and Thewi Tjau'ke gets infront of Nai'ja in a protective stance and roars at the queen but with the swipe of her tail, Thewi Tjau'ke is thrown 13 feet and now Nai'ja presses the button on her wristblades and the blue liquid rushes to the tips of her wristblades from the inside and just as about the queen was about to fully attack Nai'ja with her tail, Nai'ja cuts off the tip of the queens tail with her wristblades and the queen roars in pain but right before her eyes the queen's tail starts to quickly dissolve and as the queens tail now starting to fully dissolve, Nai'ja runs over to Thewi Tjau'ke and kneels to him seeing if he is alright and trying to get him up and now the queen roars louder in pain as her tail is now completly gone and the acid starts to completly eat her and they both watch as the queen completly dissolves within a minute.

Now both are at their feet and Nai'ja calls the mother ship telling the elder that their mission is done and they would like to come home. As the ship came to pick them up, every one was shocked when seeing Nai'ja being a female and yet destroying an entire hive was a big shocked and they knew that there was to be consiquences later on.

Now Nai'ja was ranked by the elder as a warrior, a rank much higher than blooded since they have destroyed the entire hive plus working together know matter how much they hated each other. But for Thewi Tjau'ke, he had to work more harder for his next ranking. Now heading for their home planet, Nai'ja knew that there was a punishment and the elder knew that there had to be a punishment even if he knew the entire time of her gender there still had to be one because he wants to keep the trust between him and the clan.

Now at home, Nai'ja steps out and is immediatly greeted by her mother and aunts but would never expect her mother to be crying. The punishment was not at all serious since she did save the life of a trusted Warrior plus she is the daughter of Dachande but really for her punishment was that since she was already on board the ship for 3 years before she was discovered she is to clean the ship and tend to the elder and 4 of his best hunters for their every need till the next mating season which would be 2 to 4 years but little did she know that one of the 4 hunters was Thewi Tjau'ke, even after that hunt she had no idea.

So she said her good byes to her mother, aunts and the rest of the clan and headed off as the first female in her clan to be willingly allowed in the ship with the clan males. For the first day, she was ordered to clean the floors of the lower deck of the ship where the main power source of the ship is stored and when she got there she immediatly realized that it seemed like for years no one has been down there, plus on the floor was black ash that was in desperate need to get cleaned so she started cleaning that and that took at least 4 weeks to fully clean that up plus the walls and making sure the ships power source is working fine.

And to make things a little more difficult, since she is expected to serve the elders best hunters plus himself, Thewi Tjau'ke keeps asking for her service more than anyone else even though most of the time he does not even need her he just wants to make things as hard for her as possible and makes her do things that are so completely stupid that at times she just tries to leave the room but before she goes he reminds her with his smart ass attitude that she is stull currently punished and wouldent want to tell the elder about her doing what she is not suppose to all the while he is sitting or lounging around in his quarters.

But even though he would constantly pick on her he does have alot of respect for her, since of course she did save his life and while now being around her so much, though hating to admit to himself he does have alot of feelings for her and thats the main reason why he likes her company so much and he remembers the day clearly that he sexually touched her and the way she looked as she was being in that state and how it felt and how she smelled and he was so close to being inside of her but then she kneed him right in the groin and still he holds a grudge about that and even mentioned to her about that, and all she said was that he deserved it and she did not feel any remorse about it either. And as he would fantasize about that moment with her that happened so long ago and plus knowing that she is now in the ship with him and that they because closer made him want her more more so that he wants his first time to be with her and he wants her to become the mother of his first offspring.

Months now going by and now nearing her punishment which would make her feel sad knowing that once she goes home she will never see the elder or the clan members again until mating season. As the was cleaning the floors of the main control room the elder comes in admiring her work and just walks over to the control station and sitting down on the rooms chair and turns the ship off auto pilot and starts controlling it and asks her to come over and stand next to him she does and he quickly takes her hand and places it on the stearing while he lets go and he quickly gets up and makes her sit down, while the ship falls a little at first but Nai'ja manages to fly it on her own and is so overwhelmed that she is flying the ship and as the elder was watching her he was impressed on her skills on flying the ship even though she has never flown one before. He then pats her on the back and turns the ship on auto pilot and leaves and leaving Nai'ja has a big smile on her face.

On the final day before the clan drops her off at home Thewi Tjau'ke asks her to meet him in his quarters for one last thing and she does. As she enters the room is more darker than it normally is and she can hear the door slide shut and from behind her she can feel hands gently grabbing her waist and pulling her back a little big till her back is touching someones chest and she can feel his heart beating fast from his chest as he now starts to caress her thighs and now she immediatly knew who he was as he starts whispering to her.

Thewi Tjau'ke now starting to purr starts grabbing Nai'ja's right breast and squeezing it gently plus her nipple as well arousing her. He can also feel her temperature rise as he starts taking off her loin cloth and slowly reaching his hand down and now touching her genitalia and feeling that she is quite aroused by the wetness and the heat she starts purring as he whispers to her if she remembers and she replies she does and now she can feel a buldge on her ass from his erection as he now starts to rub her clitoris with his middle finger as she now starts to spread her legs open more for him as he continues.

She now gets lifted up and placed in his bed while she can feel him get ontop of her still rubbing her as she purrs more he then quickly takes off his loin cloth and now as she closes her eyes she feels something trying to squeeze inside of her and as she now yelping in pain he uses his body weight so that she will not be able to push him off and he bites on her shoulder trying to focus her on the pain of her shoulder rather on her vagina.

As he starts thrusting the pleasure intensifies as he can feel her hymen with the tip of his penis and now he can feel it break as he still starts biting her but as he keeps thrusting he senses that she now starting to feel the pleasure and he stops biting her and thrusts harder as she embraces him tightly. Going faster, his moaning becomes louder as hers plus the pain has completly gone as the pleasure has tooken over plus scratching his back till blood starts dripping down.

As he is about to climax his body starts to stiffen a little and he does climax he roars and she still embrases him while her eyes are still closed. After every last drop of semen is released inside of her he pulls out and lifts her bottom up, her legs resting on his shoulders as she now opens her eyes looking at him as he is making sure that his semen can flow easier in her uterus. Then a couple minutes later, he lets go of her bottom and lays right next to her holding her as they both fall asleep.

Now at the home planet, Nai'ja steps out and again is immediatly greeted by her mother and aunt but she was holding onto Thewi Tjau'ke not at all wanting to leave his side but he then hugs her and she could see in his eyes that he does not want to leave her but he then turns around not looking back and enters back inside the ship and the elder looks at Nai'ja and places his hand on her shoulder as she bows her head to him. He then nods to her and leaves as now Nai'ja stands here watching the ship lifts up and flys off.

Finally at home now, the clans females were shocked finding out that Nai'ja is pregnant and Nai'ja was as well to but she knew that it was going to happen but her mother is over joyed and same with her aunts. And as Nai'ja's pregnancy progresses she still thinks about the night she had with Thewi Tjau'ke as she was rubbing her stomach lovingly and now thinking of her past of when she was younger that how badly she wanted not to be her gender she is now and that she does not like sucklings or pups at all but now with the experiences she has been through made her grow up significantly and now fully accepts who she is and is quite excited about the arrival of her suckling growing inside of her. She was even more thrilled that when the clan looked on the embryos progress they discovered that she is actually carrying 2 embryos.

Through the remaining pregnancy, the constant eating, her breasts starting to become a little larger and same with her nipples, her skin hardens and the sucklings inside of her start kicking which was driving her nuts especially when she was trying to sleep which is when they were most active. Now came the day where she went into labor and she was in labor for a good 6 hours till her son Mei'hswe was born and looking at him for the first time was pure love, especially when she got to hold him for the first time. 10 minute later, Nai'ja's daughter Mei-jadhi was born and after the delivered their placentas she nursed them and then started to rest.

Through Mei'hswe and Mei-jadhi first year of life was a huge pain for Nai'ja, though she did get the help from the clans sisters still was a challenge raising them. Mei'hswe has deffenatly tooken after his mother he was constantly crying for his mothers attention and constantly feeding. When he started to crawl he was exploring his environment, getting into everything and would pick on his sister taking everything away from her that she thought was fun, which would get her frustrated and crying. Now Mei-jadhi was so much easier than her brother she was very quiet and would hardly cry at all which would sometimes worry Nai'ja and when it came time for Mei-jadhi to start crawling she was late about it which also worried Nai'ja.

Now the sucklings are able to walk on their own which began the nightmare which Mei'hswe was now into everything and chewing due to teething and the constant drooling. He would even cry as loud as he could as he was getting into something he is not suppose to and as either Nai'ja or his grandmother, Ju'nia-chi would take it away from him or if they say no he would just cry and carry on and wanting attention from his mother to comfort him and his little sister Mei-jadhi would just sit on the floor and playing with her own toys and chewing on them because just like her brother she is teething as well and just minding her own little business and just quite happy playing with herself.

Now later on, the sucklings are now pups and their personalities are same as ever. Mei'hswe is still wild and free as ever and Mei-jadhi is still sweet and calm as ever. And Nai'ja became the captain of the clans females ship since proving to them that she did drove the elders ship and was quite excellent at it and she would sometimes would take her son on a trip with her which was one of the most exciting times he has ever had. But, she did remind him that one day he will join the clan's males and will be able to see his father every day. But for her and his sister, they will not.

Then came the day when Nai'ja recieved the news that Thewi Tjau'ke has been perminatly banished out of the clan for purposely killing one of his clan brothers. But being devistated Nai'ja demanded that she wants to see him for the last time so the elder does accept her request and picks him up from the planet they dropped him off and goes back and Nai'ja waits for him while her pups are guarded by their grandmother. As Thewi Tjau'ke walks out of the ship with a few males guarding him and now seeing that he is in chains as well.

Which, as hard as she did not want to believe just stood their and tears not flooding her eyes and she moves forward asking the guard that is infront of Thewi Tjau'ke to step aside. The guard nods and steps aside and she walks towards him and just asks why and he just smirks at her and then asks to see his pups so Ju'nia-chi steps forward with the twins by her side and Mei-jadhi holds onto her grandmothers leg shyly but her brother Mei'hswe just looks at his father for the first time and now walks and stands infront of his mother as if trying to protect her.

Thewi Tjau'ke kneels down to get in eye level with his son and Thewi Tjau'ke smiles at his son then he looks at his daughter which she is still cowering behind her grandmother then Thewi Tjau'ke askes Ju'nia-chi to have his daughter come forward and she with out hesitation says no. Then Thewi Tjau'ke askes Mei-jadhi to come forward to say hi to him but she just shakes her head and still behind her grandmother. Thewi Tjau'ke even though his hands are chained together reaches over and grabs his daughters hand with his and pulls her over by which Ju'nia-chi quickly grabs her granddaughter and Nai'ja instinstivly pushes her son away to handle the situation and the guards behind him try to pull Thewi Tjau'ke but before anybodys eyes Thewi Tjau'ke with both of his hands still chained together hits Ju'nia-chi right in the face so hard that she snaps her neck and she falls to the ground.

Now the guards start beating the crap out of Thewi Tjau'ke and Nai'ja starts screaming and running to her now dead mother and out from the crowd comes Nai'ja's aunts and they surround Ju'nia-chi body and they too start to cry while one aunt immediatly goes to the pups and covers their eyes and heads towards her chest while she cries. As the guards try to take Thewi Tjau'ke away and they head for the ship, Nai'ja gets up full of anger and emotional pain and runs towards Thewi Tjau'ke as he is being pulled away and she punshes him in the face and starts strangling him screaming how much she hates him while one of her aunts holds her down and Nai'ja cries as she watches the ship fly away.

The day of the Ju'nia-chi funeral was very emotional for everyone especially little Mei-jadhi who grew really close to her grandmother. As Nai'ja looking down at her dead mother was of course grieving but she thought of the past a little but now thinking more of the future about what is she going to do now and how to make a better life for her and her
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Riolufeetpawslave [2022-08-14 17:12:46 +0000 UTC]

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MistaSilentKiller [2012-10-29 20:18:42 +0000 UTC]

nice background story

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to MistaSilentKiller [2012-10-29 21:00:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^-^

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MistaSilentKiller In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-10-30 16:13:10 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to MistaSilentKiller [2012-10-30 16:28:08 +0000 UTC]

^-^, so how is life?

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MistaSilentKiller In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-10-30 16:50:57 +0000 UTC]

its AWESOME

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to MistaSilentKiller [2012-10-30 19:11:58 +0000 UTC]

hehe ^-^

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Mad-Monkey-Queen [2012-09-15 18:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Me likey. XD

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to Mad-Monkey-Queen [2012-09-15 18:16:05 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you ^-^

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Spearheart [2012-07-23 11:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!
I wished I could draw a yautja that well. I can't draw humanoid figures worth a flip. xD
Good luck in the contest!

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to Spearheart [2012-07-23 14:20:56 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you ^-^

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Spearheart In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-07-23 14:29:30 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. ^_^

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to Spearheart [2012-07-23 16:33:36 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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ThePredatorMan [2012-07-05 21:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Love how barbaric she looks Great stuff Ash!

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to ThePredatorMan [2012-07-05 22:38:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!

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ThePredatorMan In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-07-10 01:08:47 +0000 UTC]

No probz

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to ThePredatorMan [2012-07-10 01:57:03 +0000 UTC]

^-^ u know, i miss talking to u

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ThePredatorMan In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-07-12 15:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Aha, I apologise, I've had much to do lately, we must find time again.

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to ThePredatorMan [2012-07-12 17:07:22 +0000 UTC]

yes we shall ^-^

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ThePredatorMan In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-07-20 21:46:12 +0000 UTC]

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to ThePredatorMan [2012-07-20 22:24:03 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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Vile21XX [2012-07-03 14:44:34 +0000 UTC]

My Predator OC's clan is the Dark Blade Clan. I haven't uploaded a drawing of him yet though, although I did upload a member of his clan, Lancer. Btw this story or bio, took away my whole morning lol

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to Vile21XX [2012-07-03 16:33:12 +0000 UTC]

lol omg really? well thank you i worked hard on it, though i do not like litterature and i was getting tired of it but since it was for a contest so, yea lol

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Vile21XX In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-07-03 20:13:21 +0000 UTC]

It was good, full of details.

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to Vile21XX [2012-07-03 22:21:44 +0000 UTC]

ok thank you ^-^

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Vile21XX In reply to TheDarkBladeHuntress [2012-07-04 01:16:11 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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TheDarkBladeHuntress In reply to Vile21XX [2012-07-04 01:37:35 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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