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TheDemonSurfer — Rise Round 3- Tempest pt1

Published: 2010-01-14 05:43:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1230; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 27
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Description Edit: Colored the first half while waiting for the round results. Will it ever be fully colored? ...Most likely not.


THERE'S RAIN IT'S RAINING OKAY USE YOUR IMAGINATIONS


Part one of Tempest. Coloring is all over the place as I ran out of time. There's some lightning you can't see going on there.


Quick summary of what you don't see: race started (they're trying to get 2 out of 3 orbs), Gear got an orb, S.Y.D. hijacked the probe, Obb got an orb. Kite grins evilly.

SE: Left Behind: [link]
Cover: [link]
"Peep Show": coming soon
Tempest part 1: you are HERE
Tempest part 2: [link]


GearBox, S.Y.D., and the #5 Probe = me
Obb and the Harrowinder = +
Mr. Inverted, Mr. Henderson, Mr. Kite, Ms. Jury, 'E', and Rise =
Treble =

Awesome clouds tutorial :[link]
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Comments: 13

13-Haru-13 [2010-01-31 21:50:29 +0000 UTC]

XP you panelling is really annoying and this thing is to big for my computer, but you're really awesome at story line.

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TheDemonSurfer In reply to 13-Haru-13 [2010-01-31 23:12:26 +0000 UTC]

How is the paneling annoying? I kept showing it to my dad to make sure it wasn't confusing.

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13-Haru-13 In reply to TheDemonSurfer [2010-02-01 02:35:58 +0000 UTC]

no, i'm not saying it's bad. the reader could easily understand everything. their style just irratates me for some reason.

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TheDemonSurfer In reply to 13-Haru-13 [2010-02-01 02:44:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry? XD

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13-Haru-13 In reply to TheDemonSurfer [2010-02-01 03:30:19 +0000 UTC]

i read the three strips (one of them for the second time) and i think it's probably because of the sloppy lines in part 1, or the way you put gaps between borders even when panels over lap, or how all the gaps are the same with...

eather way, it's just for some stupid reson you should worry about. the characters are enough to keep my interest, so the panel-composition donsn't really... ya.

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13-Haru-13 In reply to 13-Haru-13 [2010-02-01 03:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I didn't revise that. It was supposed to say "either way, it's just for some stupid reason you 'shouldn't' worry about."

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Invader-Sideos [2010-01-14 12:23:37 +0000 UTC]

GASPO!

I really can't wait to read more of this fo shizzle dawg, tis epic.

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Fluna [2010-01-14 10:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow I like this page so much!!!

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TheDemonSurfer In reply to Fluna [2010-01-14 10:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay thank you!

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Trust-the-Owls [2010-01-14 06:46:56 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness! I am absolutely in love with this page! though some of it is not colored, the parts that are a truly stunning, so piercing, and the ambiance of the setting is just so impeccable, I'm dying to see more! keep it coming!

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TheDemonSurfer In reply to Trust-the-Owls [2010-01-14 07:03:10 +0000 UTC]

XD Thank you for all of your kind words!

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Trust-the-Owls In reply to TheDemonSurfer [2010-01-14 07:03:47 +0000 UTC]

^_^ just stating the obvious~

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Fuu-Inverse [2010-01-14 06:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Go, man (oknotreallybutcloseenough)! GO!

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