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Published: 2017-09-05 17:34:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description I tried a new medium this week, colored pencil. First time I used it seriously. Other work related to my Da account are coming soon!
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Majorflaw [2017-09-21 13:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Great job! Really love how you've done the gradient of shade. This is a really detailed piece, it looks really different from the artwork you usually upload! So glad to see you trying out new things!
One thing i would ask you to look at is the volumes, the table with the tv on top of it, its as if it goes into the wall.
Β The red line is your ground line, its the separation between your wall and floor. Your volumes should be in front of it if they are to be in front of the wall. It will help in emphasising the 3d feel of the drawing. Just pointing out something I noticed. Hope it was helpful
Your work is really good. The rendering is fantastic! Keep up the awesome work!

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Thediaryofinsanity In reply to Majorflaw [2017-09-21 20:18:33 +0000 UTC]

This was really helpfull thank you so much.
I really need to learn more about the volumes and perspective in general (as for backgrounds) and this helps me see it more clear. I noticed it but was a little to far ahead to change, and I hope by learning I will notice it in the sketch before I'm already coloring ^^'
Thank you for taking te time to show me and I'm so glad that someone finds the need to give me some good critique that I can work with!

So overall, thank youΒ 

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Majorflaw In reply to Thediaryofinsanity [2017-09-22 10:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Of course! anytime!
I really "feel" your artwork.So I'd love to be able to help you in any way I can. So if you're going through any problems or if you feel stuck I'll try to help out. Just ask

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