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thedreamismine — bit of Goth perhaps?

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Published: 2015-07-21 17:42:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 879; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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adyalexander [2015-07-21 18:25:17 +0000 UTC]

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Very very rarely you see nowadays a goth model. So this drew my attention and I wanted, as always, simply to point out the fault of a few details.

The model looks pretty great, the facial expression, body posture, jacket and boots are really good. And here comes the "but"

But the boxers are a no match. Obviously a perfect version would have been a shorter brief maybe with a more leather-ish aspect, or even some spikes or a slim added studded belt. But they could have worked nicely if the sides weren't so pulled up. It makes them look a bit oldish. It's nowhere near a really bad aspect though.

The only second thing I would have fixed is the backdrop. Too many wrinkles.

But that's bout it, the rest is really neat and I do like it. You really should take more pics of this guy. Just make him wear shorter boxers e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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thedreamismine In reply to adyalexander [2015-07-21 18:46:54 +0000 UTC]

A nicely thought out review Alexander.
As for the underwear, he didn't bring anything black so I loaned him mine. So besides not fitting properly, none of my underwear is of a goth style. Lol

As for the backdrop, using cloth,especially white, easily shows wrinkles. Unless I had an assistant who's job was to ensure wrinkles were always smoothed out, I just don't have the time during a shoot to smooth things out before each shot.
But then sometimes the wrinkles are useful, to provide some context.

Thanks so very much for your input.

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