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theempty — MuskCrystal by-nc-nd

Published: 2011-02-01 05:22:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Still life for college portfolio. Perfume bottle and crystal. I don't like the background, but I can't erase it with out making it look messy /:

PLEASE COMMENT

Edit: Didn't realize how bad the photo was, oh well, sorry about that, and btw, this was done all by observation, no photos or anything.
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Comments: 2

azimuth-oakes [2011-02-01 19:16:57 +0000 UTC]

beautifully rendered. you paid attention to the kind of shadow created by light passing through that kind of glass and also captured the glossy feel of the top. great work on the details on the label and keeping it in perspective! in my opinion, the crystal needs some careful reworking to be as successful as the bottle - i feel that the texture is a bit off. also, umm... yea... the background... it's too glorious... it is truly awesome but unfortunately not the subject of this work, unless this is supposed to be more than a still life study. the last thing i would say to push it one step further is to go back and make some decisions on where you want to put a few highlights and darks to expand the range of values. however, the picture probably doesn't do your work any justice, so you can probably ignore that last one... sorry for the long comment and AWESOME WORK

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theempty In reply to azimuth-oakes [2011-02-02 16:04:21 +0000 UTC]

AH! thank you so much for the detailed comment! I love those I agree with everything you said. I was in a rush to get this done for my college portfolio because it was due the next day, but yeah, the crystal definitely needs some work and I tried to push the highlights and darks but I just ended up running out of time so I gave up, maybe I'll go back to it and resubmit, or maybe just make another one. I submitted a better photo of this just a second ago, but It doesn't make it any better haha. once again, thank you for the comment! n_n

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