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TheFireWolfAuthor β Soarin' through Rainbows
Published: 2011-09-20 00:30:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 5061; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 207
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Request by CaramelMLP, idea behind the story is his, I don't own My Little Pony or Hasbro, Image isn't mine, if Resilient has a cameo he is thoughRelated content
Comments: 71
I wish I could listen or read it because all I'm getting is a white blank screen
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I'm sorry I use .PDf format so that's why
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oh, its okay so whats the story about anyway?
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Well...Soarin' leaves the wonderbolts after the Gala because he hates how they act and moves to ponyville where he and Rainbow Dash build a relationship
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Awww now I wish I could read it
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is there another way I could read the story?
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your wrong there is another way to read it hit the download file button
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either way the story is AWSOME
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boo well okay
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I like it so far. It's also interesting to see that Spitfire is a B****. The ending was kinda confusing. Though I hope I read the whole chapter. I had to download it and I notice when I downloaded stuff before it didn't download the whole fic >.<
For some reason it doesn't want to show up on DA for me.
the last part I read was
βThis but one of the reasons that you shouldnβt leave yet, come on, young one, you need to live, please live.β
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I feel like crap for never replying to this comment. I really should have.Β
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No worries my friend c:
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As soon as I get a new computer or get the old one repaired this is getting a reboot
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Sounds awesome! Let me know, I'll give it a read c:
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Excellent you can also always put me on Deviantwatch
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I was about to say, "I don't have you watched?!" but then I clicked on your page and see I have. You had me there XD
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Oh you do...? I thought you didn't I'm glad you double checked.Β
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This soarin is so completely out of character. He comes off more as a male rarity than as the goofy pie loving pony the show gave us. I mean, do you really think he'd saying this like "The conduct of the wonderbolts is as such that I regret ever joining and feel sorry for those who idolize and aspire to do so?" He's speaking like an english professor, not a slightly surfer-dudeish stunt flyer.
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Honestly how can you judge Soarin's character with only about a minute and a half of screen time? There is a chance to go deeper here and actually take a look at what Soarin' really thinks that's the fun of fanficition. Anyways I do appreciate the feedback in any case. People do seem to enjoy it and there are always going to be a few critics
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I don't need you to justify your story to me by telling me people like it. Hell, I didn't even address your story as a whole, All I said was that, while the character you created was interesting, it was not Soarin.
And yes, you can tell some things about a character from three or four lines of dialogue, especially when they're being hammy and obvious with it as they were with Soarin. He was definitely not supposed to be a learned, well spoken gentleman. That's for sure.
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I guess so, but it's fun to toy with characters this way sometimes and not everything in fandom is something you'd expect them to be in character with. The person who sort of requested this is fine with it so I'm fine with it.
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For the title?
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Quite amazing fic, I love how Soarin called out Spitfire's bull. Can't wait to see more
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There six more chapters available and quite a bit of Spit-contempt from another character in Chapter four. For further reading check out Resilient Spirit, which this is technically a companion piece for as well as Mischievous Varmits which is the Fluttermac side story
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Thank you, you might want to read Resilient Spirit as well the stories tie in together. Resilient starts a week later than this one and explains why Luna wasn't at the Gala (when you reach part 3)
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eeyup. If you want to know more about Princess Luna's "Guest" read Resilient Spirit, set a week after this story begins
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Thank you, it gets better
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I wish I could read this D:
My computer cant identify PDF's
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I'm sorry mine did as well for a time, maybe use a friend's comp.?
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Thank you
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New cover for this story is by megasupercoman_YT
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This is getting interesting I like how you made SpitFire be a total jerk on the inside, it was quite unexpected. Keep up the good work.
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This is a great first start! Thank you for doing this ^^
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