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theHalogen — The Feeling Inside
Published: 2007-11-30 15:17:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description The feelings inside,
Are they still there?
With him leaving her,
He seems not to care

She says how she loves him
How she wants them to be
But he doesn’t want to know
He doesn’t want to see

Two years have passed,
And everything’s changed
Him still not with her
His heart feels strange
The feelings are there,
But hers cease to last
He wants her again,
Yet doesn’t want to ask

The feelings inside
Are they still there?
His chance he has missed
Of this he’s aware
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Comments: 11

something44 [2007-11-30 16:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Mere words can't describe how beautiful this poem is. Great job! Simply amazing!

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Estelli [2007-11-30 15:39:50 +0000 UTC]

I really like it

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theHalogen In reply to Estelli [2007-11-30 15:43:15 +0000 UTC]

yay! fank00

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Estelli In reply to theHalogen [2007-11-30 17:18:39 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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Nhami [2007-11-30 15:32:29 +0000 UTC]

uh, yeah, it's pretty sad, but well written!!! I like it.

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theHalogen In reply to Nhami [2007-11-30 15:43:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks glad you like it, not half as good as your stuff though

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Nhami In reply to theHalogen [2007-11-30 15:44:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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JJ-Rocks [2007-11-30 15:20:23 +0000 UTC]

it's sad .. yet true.. things like this always happen

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theHalogen In reply to JJ-Rocks [2007-11-30 15:23:55 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* sadly you're right

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nestbeing [2007-11-30 15:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Awww. This poem is very bittersweet. Great job.

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theHalogen In reply to nestbeing [2007-11-30 15:23:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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