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TheJacobLB44 — Testing Writing and Tutorial Explaining
Published: 2012-08-14 22:38:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Heyas Everypony^^ This is just me testing something. Since I have absoluetly no idea how to create the map of ponyville in RPG Maker-.- I decided just to write it out for nowXD This is simply the basic idea of my tutorial session^^ Yes you can skip itXD Well for all you fanfic writers out there, am I doing it right. Also you might have noticed that I have avoided calling the OC, or green pegasus pony by name. That is because I am terribly unimaginative at namesXD. Funny how I have every single detail of the characters life except his name
The hosta la vista gag will be a running joke thing. My OC will use the same words real world me uses such as Hiyas, Hosta La Bye Byes,Yep Yep, Thank yas and buddy-budd. Also if you guys really think its bad I will either, 1. take it down or 2. Fix it. The picture, despite featuring my OC, is owned by Dshou. Please visit his page for more awesome pictures, and to help him develop his awesome game^^
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Oh it's fine, it's fine, 'though I'm a bit more pickier when it comes to structure, a few tips I learned when I analyzed through some books back when I tried to learn to write.
Use a linebreak (go to the next paragraph) when switching character dialogues in writing to help keep character lines from getting mixed up because for example, I can't tell if the paragraph starting with "Pinkie Pie then bounced onto the stage" (which btw needs a comma not a period, you should never strand a dialogue sentence) is switching between the two characters or if you were just mis-using the quotation marks and it's still Pinkie the whole time.
And for the sake of readability, this is not a hard set rule, put a second linebreak (put a blank space between paragraphs) so it's easier for people to separate them and to help check their placement in reading when they need to as well.
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Yep, I honestly didnt work that hard on thisXD I wrote it more as notes to myself for when I actually put it to the programXD Thanks for the quick reply buddy-budd.Ill fix the mistakes and make it more readable in a bit^^
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Wow I have no idea how awesome people like alexwarlorn and his team can put the text in a normal format:/
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