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Zelda!
Looks pimp.
How much was your tablet?
I'm looking at geting one but it's $99 so should I go ahead and get it?
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LOLYES.
fff thank u XD
It was $100
i think u shud.
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okay i can't give you a critique in the box (not a member) but i'll do it here!!
Okay. So first of all I'm guessing you want critique on the anatomy. A note about your description- I personally love drawing chubby things! And I know that the better you are at art, the more expansive and adaptive of different body types you have to be! So I would try drawing some chubby people!
The head- I'm not going to critique you on the facial features because I'm guessing it's a stylistic thing. But that type of ears bug me a lot. Technically, on all animals, the ears are on the side of the head! Look at pretty much any animal from any family (even pinnipeds, who don't technically have external ears) and the ears or ear-holes are on the sides of the head!
The neck is much too thick for the shoulders! I see what you were attempting to go for, I think, which is fluff, but it just seems to result in a very thick neck! The shoulders should be less rounded and definitely wider! The breasts are located too low, they need to be drawn up a little bit more. You should not be able to see the curve of the collarbone through the shirt!
The arms seem to be too drawn up and cramped. While it's technically possible to do that pose, it's not that comfortable! The hands- our left hand looks fine, but the hand on our right seems to be a little bit shriveled, almost.
The legs- if you are going for a skinny bodyshape, they need to be much more... streamlined. I suggest looking at a ref! The feet are actually really good, probably better than I could do!
The tail seems to be confusingly big, and it definitely, even if it is prehensile, should not be able to curl that far! I'm not sure what the bandaged areas in the back are. The color scheme, especially against the red pants, seem to be annoyingly bright, and smack of MS Paint default colors. It's not my choice if you change those, but I would go for something more muted/neutral if possible, with a little bit of brightness splashed in!
You definitely have some talent, and I'm just trying to help! Keep workin' at it!
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LOL. Thanks for the crit.
Yeah, I need to broaden my horizons.. But I'm still practiceing!
The head- Yeah, its more of an anime style I was going for.. Dont feel like I achieved it as well as i should have.. Got lay.. XD And the ears.. Yeah i perpously put them higher then they should be... Because its Human-like, its more like wearing a headband the real ears..
Neck-Yeah.. your right about that.. I need practice with necks. And i WAS going for fluff, but i see what you mean.. and the breasts.. Well, me myself, not in the best physical condition.. I tend not to have the best shaped tits in the world XD and the collarbone thing.. its a tight shirt..
Arms- Actually, I have no problem with this pose. Its perfectly comfortable for me.. Im weird.. 
Lol leag - i actually thought the legs looked pretty good...
And the tail... Yeah my fursona has an extremely long leaopard tail. She has TWO tails. The bandaged thing is her other tail.
and shes magic so she can bend her tail all she wants rofl. XD and the Jeans.. Well, I have a pair EXACTLY like those, and they are my fave pants. So i use them on the anthro version of my fursona.
and thanks! 
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