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TheMarrowind — Let Go
Published: 2012-03-09 00:36:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1917; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 65
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The memories of the past never seem to fade,and all the while, the feelings only seem to grow.
It all cuts deep into me, like the sharpest blade,
and yet, it all happened so long ago.
I want to let go, but I'm so afraid,
There are just so many things I want you to know.
The emotions I have, just seem to cascade,
These are the feelings, I don't want to show.
My mind seems to wander, it will never evade,
I can't seem to forget, how much I need you so.
Happiness eludes me, it's such a charade,
Sometimes I wish I could shift time and fore-go.
My thoughts play out like a full masquerade,
followed by guilt and endless sorrow.
Maybe one day though, I'll be unafraid,
and I'll finally have the courage, to just let go.
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Comments: 44
The thought-out ones are more thoughtful and intentional, I think. It's like a slow song - soothing.
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Thank you so much! 
I never thought of it as a slow song o.O
That's a very interesting way of looking at it.
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At least, that's what I think. It definitely sounds a little flowy.
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I quite like this poem it was a bit confusing i wasn't sure what the meaning behind it was but that may just be me having a blonde moment. Its still good
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I've been sitting here for the past hour trying to figure out how to respond to this, but I still don't... Maybe when i talk to you next I will be able to say something. But for now, I'm utterly speechless.
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Thank you. >P
I tried lol.
And thanks again for another fave!
As always, it's very much appreciated!
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It's very moving. Thanks for writing it
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that is exactly how i feel about somethings. beautiful writing. <3
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Thank you so much!
I'm extremely glad you enjoyed it!
And also, thank you so much for the fave.
It is greatly appreciated.
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Thank you so much!
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it. ^_^
It means a lot to me.
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Thank you very much!
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You're welcome very much!
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Thank you so much!
And once again, thank you for your fave!
Always appreciated and always means a lot to me. ^_^
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*blown away*
and i agree with everyone else about the 3rd stanza. i think it needs something more. like its missing something.
hmmmm.
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Yeah, I'm thinking...
xD Okay maybe I'm not thinking right now.. I'll have to look at it a little later and find something to make it sound better. I've looked at it too long today, and I think I need to take a step back, take a break, and then fix what needs to be done.
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yea, i know what you mean. thats why i don't like taking my time on poems, cuz then i want it to be like 200% perfect! lol. with speed writings, i don't expect that high of a standard. lol.
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Yush! That's what I feel like too lol. I don't expect much out of my speed writings. But with these.. I want more. o.O
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yea, defiantly. well, you succeded.
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I'm positive you will! ^_^
Just do your best and it will turn out amazing!
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Its a great poem! But I think the third stanza sounded a little odd. But other than that, good job
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Good enough for me lol.
I'll think of ways to edit it to make it sound better! ^_^
Thanks!
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lol no problem
Im trying to get out a writer's block so Im just scrolling through a ton of people's stuff 0.o
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Gah! I know how that is.. I had major writer's block a couple of days ago...
I hope you recover from it soon.
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Haha thanks! Lately I have just been doodling things, patiently waiting for something to come up.
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i really like this poem, of course i like most if not all of your poems, but this was is REALLY REALLY good! the flow is very nice and i love it sooooo much, like i can't even explain how much i like this!
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Thank you very much, hun!
I tried to stick to the same two rhyming sounds throughout the entire poem. I'm glad it turned out the way it did!
I'm extremely glad you liked it ^_^
Makes me happy
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you're welcome, hun! i'm glad that you're happy that i'm happy!
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Lmao. Yay for being happy! 
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Thank you! 
I was worried this one wouldn't turn out very good..
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I loved it! It's beautiful
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I'm extremely glad to hear that! ^_^
It makes me feel so much better about it.
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Feedback: it's good. Really good. The 3rd stanza seems like it needs something to me.
Other than that, your thought out poems are deep.
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Yay! Thank you so much! ^_^
I never really like taking much time in my writings. I love doing speed writings.. So this is a first for me. To finally sit down and think about what I'm going to write all day.
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