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TheMaskofaFox — ThirdRevolution 019
Published: 2013-02-23 10:30:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 36154; Favourites: 99; Downloads: 122
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Nicco and Tessa's moon light kiss is interrupted. Enjoy!
Note: Sorry this is late. Was looking after a sick family member. Everything is ok now.
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You know, having established they've got a thing for each other right here, you really need to play into that more *after* what's about to happen. It would be funny-awkward, not the awkward that makes me say "oh god no, I can't read any more of this".
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I definitely plan to play more on their relationship. Right now still letting the dust settle, before that awkward question comes up. There actually should be something on their relationship status in the next few pages.
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Also, you've GOT to proofread your words! After the effort you put into drawing all this, is it SO much additional effort to type "you're" instead of "your" when the situation demands it, or to take 30 seconds to correct it afterwards?
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Thanks for pointing that out. You are not the first person. I must have made that exact mistake (your instead of you are) on five other pages that I have since corrected (almost made that mistake writing this sentence 
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Not to be offend but For this Scene
I think it still lack of detail about where the light come from.
In my opinion It'd be good if you just put that scene to the next page..and make thing more interest(like
adding some effect.)
anyway I'm your fan now 
story is quite got my taste!
So keep it up, I expect to see more from ya
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Not offended at all. I'm still a new artist and hearing feedback like yours helps me see what I can improve on.
There will be a little more description next panel. The light in panel 019 is the same light seen in panel 002. I originally planned for this part to be longer, but after seeing that panels 040-012 were too long I decided to shorten it. Details of this event should become clearer as the story progresses.
Thanks for being a fan. It's great to have you watching.
I'll keep it up and hope to make it even better.
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You have to wait and see.
Sorry I took so long getting back to your comment. Have been busy and forgot come back and respond to it.
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no problem
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Sorry for the delay. Did not think it would take this long. Am still new to drawing comics. In retrospect would have done things differently.
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Yup,
My style has been discovered. Will have to change it up next time.
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Yup,
My style has been discovered. Will have to change it up next time.
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