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This is not a poem like you've seen them before. It's an unusual one. Because I didn't really pay attention to the words having the same ending (sometimes it looks like it). It just.. went as it went, I just wrote on. It's not much. But it's kind of worth sharing. Thanks for reading.Losing friends like a rose that loses its petals, losing contact like a rope that is about to snap.
A rope from the bridge of trust, which is fragile and weak, at any time it could collapse.
And then you fall into the deep chasm of something you have yet to know, even though you've been there before, multiple times.
Each time is different, you think as you start to climb up. Far, far away you see a light that shines.
But it's just a trap, in which you're supposed to step.
It's a good thing that you already know it's fake, because it got you good the first time.
It made you think everything would be okay again, everything will fall in line.
But that's not completely true, you know now for sure. You better keep climbing until you reached the bridge again.
Your hands are tired, your body's trying to hold itself up on your journey which long ago began.
Because you could've known it from the start, but you didn't believe your first impressions.
If you only did, who knows where you would've been. On the bridge, or in the distance?
In the distance you see after walking over the bridge which is fragile and dangerous.
But once you made it, you know it is true. Then you can say it out loud, so everyone could listen.
Listen to the sentence you have been wanting to say and be able to say again and again, the whole time.
"You are a true friend of mine".
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Comments: 24
themadhatter01 In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-11-29 08:13:28 +0000 UTC]
Its me ! Scarecrow
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to themadhatter01 [2011-11-29 15:23:46 +0000 UTC]
I know! xD I can still thank you! XD
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themadhatter01 In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-11-29 15:44:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank me !? nooooo dont do that
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to themadhatter01 [2011-11-29 15:51:01 +0000 UTC]
..You said it was good, so I say thanks xD
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themadhatter01 In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-11-29 15:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Really ? you know for sure
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to Maru-COOKIEJAR [2011-07-25 10:08:44 +0000 UTC]
Why thank yewwww >3<
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CoffeeFuel [2011-07-24 11:42:22 +0000 UTC]
wow dat heb je echt goed geschreven ;-;
ik vind het echt zo erg voor je
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to CoffeeFuel [2011-07-24 16:35:44 +0000 UTC]
Dankje, en it's fine, I'll manage
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Rookiejj [2011-07-22 21:01:13 +0000 UTC]
Ohw the movie plays inside my head over and over again, and it's a great way to be able to express feelings I think.
You really shouldn't care if someone talked trash about this. Because it IS precious, and it IS amazing, because it comes from inside you.
And I know this sounds really cheesy, but the best things about you, or the best things you can make, usually do come from inside your heart.
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to Rookiejj [2011-07-22 21:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Hahah I love the cheesyness.
And thank you so much Really appreciated.
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Rookiejj In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-07-22 22:43:45 +0000 UTC]
pssst.....btw..... ITALIA =3
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Denmen707 [2011-07-22 09:39:10 +0000 UTC]
It sketched a mental image in my head as I was reading it. This however isn't just a story, it's how you feel and that makes it even more inpressive in my eyes.
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to Denmen707 [2011-07-22 10:40:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, dear
And it's good to hear that I'm not the only one who sees images while reading it..
I really wish I could animate this, because the I could fully show how I feel. And in this case that is good, to show how I feel.
But on the other hand, now it's open for everyone to imagine it the way they want..
So maybe it's good I can't animate, at least in this case
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TUNADRAGONTACOCOW [2011-07-21 23:06:04 +0000 UTC]
I really like it, you shouldn't delete it. It's your words, your expression and your choice. I think that a lot of people wouldn't open up like this publicly unless it was for attention, and that doesn't seem like you. Keep pumping out the power, the emotion, and don't ever worry about rhythm or scheme unless that's the atmosphere you want, and definitely don't worry about how other people will interpret it, because art is entirely subjective.
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to TUNADRAGONTACOCOW [2011-07-22 08:21:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the kind and motivating words!
And no it wasn't for attention, it was just a let-out, something that came to mind.
Just.. Thank you so much
Your icon made me laugh C: it's funny!
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TUNADRAGONTACOCOW In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-07-22 09:19:39 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all.
Haha, yeah my friends say I have a pretty good earthworm face.
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boobsareimportant [2011-07-21 23:02:58 +0000 UTC]
you know what i have to say , i just wished that i could do something about it realy :c
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to boobsareimportant [2011-07-21 23:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Reading and listening is enough <3
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boobsareimportant In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-07-23 13:50:37 +0000 UTC]
getting better ?:$
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TheMasterOfRandom In reply to boobsareimportant [2011-07-23 15:41:24 +0000 UTC]
I think. Thanks for asking <3
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boobsareimportant In reply to TheMasterOfRandom [2011-07-23 18:51:13 +0000 UTC]
noproblem xD im always thinking about mah friends <3
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