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Published: 2005-07-12 07:53:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description Irregular fireworks shot off
To the heavens.
Pieces of light, exploding, fell back
To the earth,
Failed stars.
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Comments: 5

paradisedweller [2006-01-12 06:32:29 +0000 UTC]

never doubt the power of a short poem. If you can complete a thought in less than ten lines you are far more masterful than someone who can go on and on to create imagery.

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False-Redeemer [2005-07-12 21:57:37 +0000 UTC]

The fireworks' lives are short, but beautiful and bright.

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tink-kiki [2005-07-12 21:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful. I don't think anyone could match up to the first verse except you.

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themissinglint In reply to tink-kiki [2005-07-12 22:17:54 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate your ridiculus flattery.

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tink-kiki In reply to themissinglint [2005-07-13 00:43:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you??

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