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FINAL THOUGHTS
I feel I pretty much rushed the ending on this one visually. The story itself is pretty cute and i'm glad I got to work on it. Thanks Atrox for the cute bedtime story!
I'm not too happy with the final product, but you got to move on.

Some things for me to remember; be aware of character placement in the panels, do more research on cities and environments.
Switch from sepia to solid BLACK and WHITE. Don't be lazy.

Anymore thoughts on this would be great! This was just a test comic to see what I wanna do for the Bombs Away stories. I learned a lot.

(next week buttons explains to truffles that buckwheat was asking her out and not offering free food)

Written by Atrox-C and drawn by me.

<< BA - Toons Trash p09 | END

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Description
FINAL THOUGHTS
I feel I pretty much rushed the ending on this one visually. The story itself is pretty cute and i'm glad I got to work on it. Thanks Atrox for the cute bedtime story!
I'm not too happy with the final product, but you got to move on.

Some things for me to remember; be aware of character placement in the panels, do more research on cities and environments.
Switch from sepia to solid BLACK and WHITE. Don't be lazy.

Anymore thoughts on this would be great! This was just a test comic to see what I wanna do for the Bombs Away stories. I learned a lot.

(next week buttons explains to truffles that buckwheat was asking her out and not offering free food)

Written by Atrox-C and drawn by me.

<< BA - Toons Trash p09 | END

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