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Christine fled into her dressing room, locked the door. She sat at her vanity and laid the drawing on it, stared at its contents. “Erik,” she thought. So this was how he looked like.Or would have looked like.
She grasped her shoulders, feeling a cold not unlike the one she had felt the day before, deep in the caverns underneath the opera house. She remembered his venomous words—“Only five days. Could you not have waited five days you little whore!? Five days and then you would have seen my face, for you would have loved me then. But now…now you have seen me too soon. Now you are mine.”
Seemingly without her own volition, her hand grasped a stick of charcoal, one she normally would use to scribble down notes, and drew thick, dark, childish strokes over the artful ones Meg had drawn. She began to sweat, as those imaginary thoughtful eyes metamorphosed into big, watery, sunken, glaring ones; his calm lips into a thin, strained, animal snarl; the shading Meg had tried so hard to master darkened, his cheekbones sticking out like a starved man’s; and finally, a gaping hole over that beautiful, simple, normal one that did not exist. A living skull.
Christine was no artist; yet with a few simple strokes she had transformed the drawing into a grotesque parody of what was already grotesque.
Erik’s face.
She had hoped, that, with this picture, she could see a better face—or at least a different one, to put in place of the ugliness. To be able to bear the burden of this creature’s love, to be able to love him back.
For the Phantom of the Opera had claimed her, and she had no choice but to love him.
She crumpled the picture and threw herself against the vanity, sobbing.
I can’t…I can’t…I can’t…
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this is the very same picture used in [link] , defaced with an actual stick of charcoal. (okay it was a pencil) Happily I saved the original sketch from permanent destruction by tracing it, to be used for future reference. I was surprised that it actually turned out okay.
This entire piece, picture, defacement and prose together, was a little "between the lines" thing that popped up whilst I was reading the novel...I'd like to do a retelling of it, dunno whether it'd be comic, or animation, or movie, or illustrated novel...the last one would go well with this piece, I think.
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Comments: 16
AdAbsurdum [2009-01-11 09:50:03 +0000 UTC]
I love the swiftness and violence of those lines - that twisted lip. The gaping hole where the nose should be.
And I especially love the accompanying text. You really captured the vying feelings of utter horror and obligation that poor Christine must have felt. Wow.
(Sorry for the influx of comments. I've just realized I've been neglecting a treasure trove right under my nose. *smacks head*)
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thenumber42 In reply to AdAbsurdum [2009-01-11 23:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no problem. I enjoy free reading material.
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Crouching-Tora [2008-09-20 02:26:57 +0000 UTC]
Leroux, I love you and your insanity so so much...!
Great way of recreating the picture, bytheway. Hooray! Deformity!
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Anonymiss731 [2008-09-01 22:30:06 +0000 UTC]
You have just secured Erik/Meg as my OTP. Sorry Chrissy but your just gonna have to settle for second place, at least your above original characters. Defacing Meg's art, ouch. It's a good thing Christine is normally nice and didn't do it thinking about Meg. It's just she's gone daffy. I love it when art or story stir emotion. Your very good at that. I went flipping back and forth between this one and the tabs of the original and I'm so impressed at the way certain lines can transform a work. I especially like the line at the edge of his face and the lines around his eyes. *claps*
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thenumber42 In reply to Anonymiss731 [2008-09-03 19:01:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! That's quite a compliment
I'm not one for shipping/OTPs/what-have-you but if you got something good out of it I'm glad.
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bramblefox [2008-01-31 02:53:42 +0000 UTC]
WAAAAAH!! *bawls*
This is great! I love the mini-story behind it...but I have a question about the face earlier. Is that supposed to be what he looks like with a life-like mask, or what?
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thenumber42 In reply to bramblefox [2008-01-31 04:41:54 +0000 UTC]
It's Christine's make-believe version of how Erik would have looked like if he had a normal face.
I'm glad you like it! I haven't read this in years.
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bramblefox In reply to thenumber42 [2008-01-31 14:18:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh. I ought to read that story to see what the heck is going on...
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thenumber42 In reply to bramblefox [2008-02-01 02:45:39 +0000 UTC]
The link's in the description.
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bramblefox In reply to thenumber42 [2008-02-01 03:37:18 +0000 UTC]
Got it! *goes to check it out*
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Dragon-hobbit101 [2006-05-19 03:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Poor unhappy Erik.............................
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thenumber42 In reply to Slowlydying [2005-09-21 17:17:06 +0000 UTC]
That means it worked. Thank you!
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yourTOESareMISSING [2005-07-21 16:02:37 +0000 UTC]
VERY cool.
*squee im the first to comment!*
i really like this! ^^
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