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THEprophetMOSES — Lightning Crashes WIP 02 01 05
Published: 2005-01-03 12:24:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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[edit] Decided to do some more work on it. Youll see more later [/edit]Live - Lightning Crashes
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Lightning crashes...a new mother cries...
Her placenta falls to the floor...
The angel opens her eyes...
The confusion sets in...
Before the doctor can even close the door...
Lightning crashes...an old mother dies...
Her intentions fall to the floor...
The angel closes her eyes...
The confusion that was hers...
Belongs now to the baby down the hall...
Oh now feel it coming back again...
Like a rolling thunder chasing the wind...
Forces pulling from the center of the Earth again...
I can feel it...
Lightning crashes...a new mother cries...
This moment she's been waiting for...
The angel opens her eyes...
Pale blue colored eyes...
Presents the circle and puts the glory out to hide, hide...
Oh now feel it coming back again...
Like a rolling thunder chasing the wind...
Forces pulling from the center of the Earth again...
I can feel it...
I can feel it...
I can feel it coming back again...
Like a rolling thunder chasing the wind...
Forces pulling from the center of the Earth again...
I can feel it...
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I spent many hours working on this modelling the room and all of the objects in it. You can't really see it very well because of the dark lighting (on purpose because it's meant to be night time) but if you want to see it in daylight have a look in my scraps you'll find it somewhere. Then after I had to draw the outside scenery in, this was my plan to do from teh beginning but it didn't turn out so good. It could look alot better but I've spent enough time on this already.
Still criticisms would be great and I might end up changing it depending on what it is, like if it is way too dark (my monitor has a habbit of being pretty bright) I can up it a little (but don't forget is is meant to be at night). I also would have liked to have had light sortof streaming in from the moon or something, but I decided it would be a bit hard.
But I still think it looks good as a whole, what do you think?
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Comments: 4
thats really great! You decided not to include the train?
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yeah I'll use it in another project though.
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It is particularly dark. Rather than just increasing the brightness, how about placing a candle or two in the scene?
Overall I think it's pretty good. Oh, the lightning does look a little too cartoonish, have you thought of maybe finding a stock photo to work with?
Good song choice, I've had that one stuck in my head for the last two weeks.
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Hey thanks the candle is a good idea, but you have to remember I'm using Bryce, so that would explain the cartoon-ness. I used Fake GI so that made it alot better but it still has a long way to go. I used about 10 different photos to model the scene, but the stuff in the window was just out of my head.
Thanks for the criticisms.
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