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theRealBombshell β€” brownian motion
Published: 2004-07-15 01:09:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description lost loss losing gone

fingers are made for slipping through
and nothing holds togetherβ€”why do you think the world is made up of atoms, lonely and swirling, huddling together until something better comes along?

fine, fine, fine and individually faceless, like grains of sand
the fabric of life is pixellated and together is just a collection of letters.

letters, words, looks,
meaning floats across the void
tenuous spider-thread of me to you
no anchor in the shifting wasteland

beauty lies in desolation
life is beautiful.
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Comments: 8

matcH-Box [2004-07-27 00:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Just the right amount of irony and sarcasm. I love your work. Great job.

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Pyro-gold [2004-07-16 02:34:43 +0000 UTC]

once again, great job! I love it!

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lily-day [2004-07-15 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

wow. very nice. it reminded me of noir films for some reason.

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theRealBombshell In reply to lily-day [2004-07-16 00:17:26 +0000 UTC]

coolness! gratz.

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dNlbNtl [2004-07-15 07:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Man...that was cool.

The style is kooky and complex, all interwoven..this part being tied in with that part. It's like one big kenning...I especially like:

"...beauty lies in desolation
life is beautiful."
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Great poem!

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Praecox [2004-07-15 02:19:49 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* you make words swim in my head. Making me want to write again. now I'm dizzy.

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lifeeternal13 [2004-07-15 01:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey! I'm the first to comment!

Anyway, this has a lot of meaning, and I really like the "life is lonely" meaning there. If that's not what you were going for ... Anyway, it's really pretty.

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theRealBombshell In reply to lifeeternal13 [2004-07-15 02:03:32 +0000 UTC]

that's exactly what i was going for... thank you!

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