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theRealBombshell — coffeepot thoughts
Published: 2004-07-15 00:34:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description terra incognito, the corners of my mind,
terra incognito, and far from firma.
firmament of firecrackers, coursing and exploding
constantly reloading
never finished, always ending, reaching ever, ever splendid
every thought is a mystery
every person a pattern unguessable,
unseen...
unsightly
yet lovely in the extreme
extremes of moderation every day... the fluorescent tension is so unbelievably smooth
smooth like dirty linoleum
old enough to crack
what is behind the pinstripes and coffeecups?
inner landscapes so wild and unchartable they must be buried, inaccessible,
behind protective veils of bone and skin
the skin i’m in
armor and prison and fuel, the outside for my
in
what is touching?
the crash of continents
tectonic, electric,
unnoticed
how is it that we share a planet?
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Comments: 5

Pyro-gold [2004-07-16 02:32:57 +0000 UTC]

I love that! you use words really well (I know, that sounds liek a lame comment, but its true! )

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theRealBombshell In reply to Pyro-gold [2004-07-16 17:55:44 +0000 UTC]

that's not a lame comment at all-- in fact, it's a very high compliment, especially coming from someone whose poetry i like so much. thanks!

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Pyro-gold In reply to theRealBombshell [2004-07-16 22:15:05 +0000 UTC]

aww.. I feel loved... I needed that... I've been feelign that my work is really crappy lately.

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dNlbNtl [2004-07-15 07:19:47 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!

That was f-in' amazing...

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Praecox [2004-07-15 02:21:31 +0000 UTC]

:woot: I love this! You should email it to Oz - he would dig as well!

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