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Published: 2004-07-27 00:19:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description this is what endures.

of loss, and sweat, and love

this is what endures.

the brain and heart and body twist with effort

curling around sadness and frustration

winding, winding the days around this sharpness

days over hours over minutes over realizations;

slowly smoothing, brightening

coalescing

changing

life

into

memory.
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Comments: 6

frankienexus [2004-07-31 11:26:49 +0000 UTC]

i love the structure
the thrust of this
and the gentle pull
of truth

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theRealBombshell In reply to frankienexus [2004-07-31 11:42:57 +0000 UTC]

much thanks

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Pyro-gold [2004-07-27 03:24:57 +0000 UTC]


this is awesome... honest. clean. thoughtful. thought-provoking. I love how you space out the words so its like the poem trails off into.... 'memory'.

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theRealBombshell In reply to Pyro-gold [2004-07-27 04:08:55 +0000 UTC]

*GRIN* thank you. thank you!

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Praecox [2004-07-27 02:47:49 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. I love it.

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theRealBombshell In reply to Praecox [2004-07-27 04:16:45 +0000 UTC]

shanksh, bebe.

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