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Published: 2004-07-27 00:19:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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this is what endures.of loss, and sweat, and love
this is what endures.
the brain and heart and body twist with effort
curling around sadness and frustration
winding, winding the days around this sharpness
days over hours over minutes over realizations;
slowly smoothing, brightening
coalescing
changing
life
into
memory.
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Comments: 6
frankienexus [2004-07-31 11:26:49 +0000 UTC]
i love the structure
the thrust of this
and the gentle pull
of truth
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Pyro-gold [2004-07-27 03:24:57 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome... honest. clean. thoughtful. thought-provoking. I love how you space out the words so its like the poem trails off into.... 'memory'.
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theRealBombshell In reply to Pyro-gold [2004-07-27 04:08:55 +0000 UTC]
*GRIN* thank you. thank you!
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