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TheRed β€” I will
Published: 2003-12-21 09:51:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 370; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 21
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Description I lie awake
but I am dead inside,
my body aches and eyes are wide,
open and shut, at the same time.
I am weary from striving to reach the top of the hill; the way out of this place I like to call home.
It is home. A home of hurt, of sickness, of death, and terror and smut.

There are no comforts. I cannot find one.

Wait there is such a light!
His name is I am and in Him I will reach
the top, the peak-the only way out, of this hole thatΒ I call home.
Because He has lived in this darkened place, this place that I call home,
I can rest assured that He does understand what I may go through and how my body does hurt!
Again and again He has sent me the ones that do fill my heart with such joy
So why pray tell, am IΒ anxious! Why do I fear this place that I call home?
I live with His Spirit, and in Him I will rise
to the top of this place I now call...Home.
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Comments: 8

NePtOoNZ [2005-03-18 21:51:47 +0000 UTC]

NICE POETRY! MAY GOD BE WITH YOU!

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MurfQ [2005-02-10 12:27:36 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful. Represents so well the transition from despair to hope with Jesus.

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Jen9 [2003-12-21 23:43:48 +0000 UTC]


It's very good babe!

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melliegurl2005 [2003-12-21 16:44:52 +0000 UTC]

wow, awesome! i like how it goes from hopelessness to hope in God! nice work!

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llatrejull [2003-12-21 15:17:29 +0000 UTC]

man that is such a beautiful work. praise God that we are mearly sojourners or pilgrims in this world and our home is being prepared by Jesus in Heaven. [1Pet2:11]

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TheRed In reply to llatrejull [2003-12-21 23:09:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes...thank God, always.

Thanks for the words brother.

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LostBlueDreams [2003-12-21 09:53:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the emotion, really beautiful. The imagry is perfect! Well done

Fantastic work



Dreams~

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TheRed In reply to LostBlueDreams [2003-12-21 09:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...all in the name of Jesus.
God bless...and again thanks.

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