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Published: 2003-12-22 20:55:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 414; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 14
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Description Light is dimming,
consciences slimming
nights are winning

it will never stop.

Wanting,
needing,
screaming for

our hearts to make it stop.

Leaders lying
children crying
in fields

oh, when will it stop?

Hurting,
awaiting,
searching for

a way to make it stop!

Desiring,
pleading,
asking for

this madness all to stop!

Killing goes on,
hearts grow harder
minds go numb

because it doesn't stop!

Others taking...
their lives...
for a chance to make it end


The end is near. My ear doth hear.

Mine eyes begin to see.

It will never, oh! won't it ever?  
Please Come make it,

STOP!!!.
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Comments: 8

xandershanks [2004-01-02 21:12:56 +0000 UTC]

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ElfyAJ [2004-01-02 18:50:09 +0000 UTC]

This is good. I like it. It has an almost haunting quality about it. But this is very good.

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abysscus [2003-12-26 00:50:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'm seeing a successful transitions from photo manipulator to poet.

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TheRed In reply to abysscus [2003-12-27 13:45:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

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Anghiari [2003-12-22 23:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work man!

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melliegurl2005 [2003-12-22 21:34:26 +0000 UTC]

interesting set up ... i like it alot! nice work!

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TheRed In reply to melliegurl2005 [2003-12-22 22:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
Blessings.

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melliegurl2005 In reply to TheRed [2003-12-22 23:10:34 +0000 UTC]

no prob
same to u!

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