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Hello everybody!!!So, I'm going to write a book, but I'm in need of some proof readers and writers!!!
So, for the writers, I'll be giving you a short story starter and you'll continue on!! I'll be picking the people who's story I enjoyed reading the most! You MUST send your completed short story to my notes, so I can read them individually
For the proof readers, I'll give you a paragraph and you'll send me a NOTE with the correct version (I don't want others to look at what you've correct).
WRITERS:
Here's your chance to shine! I'm about to give you a paragraph, and I'm asking for you to continue on! Here's some things I would absolutely LOVE and what would give you higher chances in being in my writer team:
- an exciting story
- a little bit of humour
- well written characters (design traits, personality, ect.)
- descriptive language! (Sets the mood and makes me feel like I'm there)
Now, what you've been waiting for! The story-starter!!!!
She winced in pain as the tall, armoured stranger slashed her with his sword. She tried to hold on the the tall trees trapping her and him together. She felt defeated. "What do you want from me?" She asked as a tear ran down her cheek, similar to the river nearby.
The man looked down at her with a wicked grin on his face, as he said the things she thought she'd never hear in her life...
ANDD that's your started! You can choose the character's name and what the man says, but I'm honestly happy with this starter! Can't wait to see what you come up with!!!
NOW PROOF-READERS:
You have been given the task of correcting the mistakes in this next paragraph (IF there's any) and you'll send me the corrected version through NOTES.
Here is what you'll be correcting:
Me and my mother Sarah and my big sister Kate went to the park. The slides were long, yellow and fun. I loved playing on the see-saw with kate. And my mother pushed my on the swing and I yelled out yay!
Quite simple, but I have a feeling there will be some mistakes people won't correct
Reply to the right highlighted comment so I know who's joining what, but remember to send the correct file OR the story in my NOTES! I will ignore it if it's sent somewhere else!
Oh, and I forgot, the people who I choose will help draw the cover with me!!
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