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Published: 2016-11-13 10:27:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 783; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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One of life's saddest obstacles is distance from loved ones -- whether through a physical distance like living in different countries, an emotional distance like a sibling trapped in an abusive marriage, or even the distance of death.I hope to convey in this piece the absolute joy of defeating that distance, even if it's through the most unique and unconventional means of the parts of you and your loved ones coming together to make a greater whole.
[Mixed media: watercolor, colored pencil, pen, white gel pen, white and silver acrylic]
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Comments: 13
Hello! I found your piece on
I really like the colors you´ve used and the way you did it. Even though they are very strong and vibrating colors, and pink and red are difficult to put together (at least it is to me), you did it very well. The thing I don´t like is the brown of the instrument, I think you should use a different color from the color of the hair, in order to make it even more interesting and not repetitive. For example, I think that a more yellowish color would have made it.
The composition is really nice.
Something else I could say is that you need to improve human anatomy. The face of the body in blue is very good and it´s beautiful, but some things are not proportionate, the hand should be bigger. There´s no need to lose your style while improving that (I mean, for example, manga is known for big eyes) but, I mean, there´s a difference between doing something someway wanting to do it that way, and doing it that way because there´s a need of practising and studying
I like this drawing a lot, it catched my eye! And I like your gallerie. Hope this helps!
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Gracias! I appreciate your comment. I'm glad you mentioned the composition is nice because it was really important to me to try and compose this well.
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Hi dear! Found your deviation on
I love the composition you made! The characters in the background are ghostlike, and the colour combination is pleasant. I also love the smirk on the main characters face, as if it is hiding something 
One remark I have about the figure on the left is that the human anatomy seems a bit off. Your portraits skills are on point, however the stance and the left hand of the man seem to lack some proportion. I would recommend working with reference photo's for improving anatomy. For example, has great stockphoto's for finding the right pose/stance. Keep in mind that most great artists always use reference photo's for correct anatomy and pose!
I really like this piece and I can see that you have talent. Hope you can use my feedback to improve even more!
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Thank you for your kind (and helpful) comment!
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But you still liked it, I hope?
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Oh yeah it was great
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I hope that feeling came through in my piece
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