HOME | DD
TheShortbusBrigade β Exalted
Published: 2004-04-08 14:27:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1583; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 175
Redirect to original
Description
A collab between:+
credits .. //
Stock photo: [link]
Poetry: *kamijisatsu
Manipulation: *TheSquab
Exalted
reflection
of beauty
through that
looking glass
envious visions
of hate filled
tragedies
exalted by
the addiction
of my lust
i am
waiting to be
reborn again
new again
whole again
trust in me
lie through me
die through me
i will be
purified.
Related content
Comments: 23
Somehow I see that reflection as our dark unconscious, what we won''t let other see but what really defines us. Really nice picture.
π: 0 β©: 0
has great texturing, definantly a believable peice by far 0ne of my fav0rites n0w...
π: 0 β©: 0
I found this out by Joe!! Oh my GOD!!!
The image :I looked the original and I am so amazed!!! Incredible work and manipulation...It is not overwhelmed with blood or cracks...stunning!
The poem: You have a very unique way of writting!! Not like all those poems or writtings that I find so often...
"exalted by
the addiction
of my lust" Lust is a very strong word!!! and it's so perfectly used here....
lie through me
die through me 
π: 0 β©: 0
Wonderful work you two.
The manip is amazing, I am in awe.
Sis, this is a powerful piece you have written here....
-nods-
I really do love this....
π: 0 β©: 0
I really like this piece....both on technical merit, and emotional conveyance.
Visually, it's a very interesting perspective, I really love how it shows the duplicity of her situation, and life through the wording of the poem....dying internally from past mishaps....to a feeling of outwardly dying as well...
Very beautiful....it shows the raw feeling of human emotional negativity well...
π: 0 β©: 0
I liked it!
Great job to the both of you!
π: 0 β©: 0
it fascinates me..... teh eyemakeup is kewl too..... sweet
π: 0 β©: 0
The Poem: I like it. The woman, hating herself for past tragedies. Using lust as an addiction. The thought of purification through trust, lying, and dying. All creative ideas. It's a well written piece.
The manipulation: I'm not a digital artist so I can't give a great critique of it. All I can say is that it fits the poem wonderfully. It accentuates the poem without stealing the spotlight from it. That and it looks really cool.
Great job both of you.
π: 0 β©: 0
I like the skin texture. Looks really good. Great job.
π: 0 β©: 0
Nice manip! And the poetry completes it perfectly!
π: 0 β©: 0
I can't say how much I like this. The image is wonderful, and the poetry has something to it. I know you don't like it much and I wouldn't go as far as to say its the best thing you've ever done but it does have a certain ring to it. I like both pieces of it. The ending really makes the writing for me, and the mirrored reflection of the woman as she sees herself is great.
π: 0 β©: 1
I wouldn't go as far as to say its the best thing you've ever done
That's just a really nice way of saying "you failed".
π: 0 β©: 1
Its not me saying you failed. I just know that you can do better baby. I'm sure you will get something you are very proud of soon enough.
π: 0 β©: 1
