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theSingularityguy — Singularity Page 1
Published: 2011-10-03 01:53:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 809; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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The first page to my webcomic, Singularity. I am currently working on the 8th page, and I will post a link to the website when it is up and running. The main character it Ryan, the hottie it the middle. That sounded weird. I'm a guy. But he is sexy!Anyway, tell me what you think, and if you have any critical responses, comment. Unless it's about how the guys are half naked. I like my anatomy, and I'm not about to cover it up.
Singularity is about a technological singularity set in 2068, where robots think like humans. This is hardcore si-fi, and this could really happen. Look up the Singularian institute for more things on this. No link, use google, I'm in a rush.
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This looks rather interesting... I wonder what is going on. And the composition looks quite unusual and therefore quite amusing.
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The arrangement of things in the drawing.
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The anatomy to me looks pretty good, and the shading on the clothes has been done very well too I think. Good luck with the webcomic
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the concept is pretty good and you did a good job with the perspective along with the shading and paid good attention to the light source. Are your lines usually this sketchy though?
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Thanks and yeah, my style is a little sketchy, it's easier, saves time, and looks better, because your eyes just make the perfect line out of the many.
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hm... just a bit more refinement and your style would actually remind me of Blade of the Immortal, the mangaka's style with lining was also kinda broken but it looked just as good. Anyway Great job
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hmm, it's like his entire works are just sketches, good ones, but yeah. except he shades with sketch.
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I'm liking the concept. =3 The world needs more sci-fi.
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oh, you should see the script, way more in depth. The discription seems like every sci-fi there is, but this is based on fact, and probably has the best storyline ever seen in a webcomic.
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Very manly. It reminds me of a Christian rock album cover cir. South Park.
Nice effort on the depth of this picture. I feel like you could do well to find a strong focal point for this.
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... strong focal point?
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Well you have put an equal amount of detail into each character, and have built up the mountains in the background as much at the bulitan board in the midground, so my eyes don't know where to go. Do you know much about visual hiarchy?
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Well, sometimes when i am looking at a picture with a strong focal point, I look at one thing, and never see the rest. There was a technique that I learned that kept people's eyes wondering about the page, so that they see all the detail. It works best with these establishing shots to what would normaly be a multi panneled comic.
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this actually a really good picture. I'm kinda bad at drawing guys so i can't say much constructive but i like it
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Thanks. I looked at your page, and I didn't even see any drawings of guys, maybe if you practice, you'll get better. Actually I gaurentee it, Thats how I got my drawings at this level.
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lol i have two guys actually XD that proves i need work
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lol its okay! XD
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