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Published: 2013-08-10 00:53:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 489; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description Awake? Awake at last?
Or is it possible I still sleep.
Have I entered yet another dream?
If so then spare me.
The routine grows so weary.
The faces come as they always do,
Those three hypocrites who in turns strike me-
With first a hammer, next a blade, finally a metal glove.
A blinding flash, they disappear,
I stand on piles of ash.
I have a dream I'm buried in that ash.
I do not struggle, I do not move.
I try to talk but choke-
As it enters through my mouth, my throat, my lungs.
It BURNS in my nose, my ears, my eyes!
I dream that I am dying!
Then realize I already have.
Eight hands find and pull me free,
Each gripping a separate limb.
My seven brothers, my blood brothers.
Each and every stand before me!
I am filled with pride and honor!
Each and every smile at my face.
But there is another man, an eighth hand.
The hand of the friend.
The hand of the traitor.
Fear replaces pride,
as he pulls me into an embrace.
As he pulls away I ask him "why"
he merely smiles.
And slips the golden mask around my face.
But this is no dream.
My fingers feel and touch,
My breath steady and controlled.
AWAKE! Awake at last!
Once more risen from the ashes,
risen, risen,
I WILL rise once more to my former glory!
CALL me Sleeper!
CALL me Dreamer!
Call me ash born!
And a god! For I am in fact-
Different from the three who slew me.
BEHOLD, the true god!
And the one god!
Come my sleepers!
All my dreamers!
Praise my holy name! Say it! Dagoth Ur!
.... But....
Am I mad?
I must be to be what I am,
To feel as I feel.
Even now in daylight I still dream.
Yet what I dream I now dreamt,
What I dreamt I now am.
Dreams of deformities and of storms,
Dreams of liberation of my kind.
I dream of justice.
I dream of vengeance.
And of holding my tools once more.
I WILL hold my tools once more!
.... But....
I am mad.
Truly I must be to dream these thoughts.
The heart reminds me,
The golden veil which I now wear-
Hides what I once was, alive.
I dream that I am alive,
Knowing it could be but a dream.
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Comments: 3

Badhead-Gadroon [2013-08-10 08:56:14 +0000 UTC]

}8>D Bloody hell, what an epic art of lettering you have made for our eyes! I shall have to share this with the watchers posthaste. Give me a few moments to construct a bewafflement and a train of interested fellows shall follow. Your articulation of the brandied-one is most splendid, ornamented with words and threaded with prose, a word tapestry befitting the one who dreams. {8>) Very well done to you, my friend.


<------ Second helpings for you, Sourpatch! BOTTOMS UP!

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TheSourpatch In reply to Badhead-Gadroon [2013-08-10 23:03:46 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate the things you said about my writing. I rarely share my work on something so global as DA, even more rarely have it recognized. I wanted to say that I'm a big fan of your art, I find it most intriguing, fascinating, or was it puzzling? No, definitely beautiful. I recently showed my mother and we can both agree that we sorta just sat and stared.
......... *hic* Thank you dear friend... I find myself going more cross eyed by the *hic* minute! I salute you! (and down the bottle)

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Badhead-Gadroon In reply to TheSourpatch [2013-08-11 12:20:57 +0000 UTC]

{X>D I'm glad your drink is hitting the gullet like a flaming tiger, my friend! Ho,ho,ho. Nothing like a strong drink to chase out all the ghosts. Indeed, Sourpatch, let us take the journey together, I would love to read more of your work, I find it concisely detailed and a joy to the eyes. So I will follow you with interest and perhaps feature more of your works in the future. {8>B You shared my artings with your mother? Thank you so much! That's so sweet of you to do that. I'm thoroughly honoured that you spent eyetime on my inklings, whenever I hear feedback from anybody it helps me grow a little more as an artist and as an all-round fleshpuzzle. I may also be found on Bethblog, but lately I have been spending more time over at Capcom with all the Monster Hunter excitement that has been brewing of late. {X>3 Well then, I shall add you to my watch, and bid you a fantastic day! Goodbad to thee, merrish fiend!

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