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TheTimePolice — BFOI OIT-263 - Round 8 - Part 4
Published: 2012-01-31 01:02:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1793; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 23
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------------------------------------------------------------Boat Reference - Coming
Part 1 - Introduction - [link]
Part 2 - The Plan - [link]
Part 3 - MARC - [link]
Part 5 - The Lab - You're Here
Part 6 - Fritz - [link]
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For #Battle-Frontier
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Extra Information
This was an uphill battle, sorry for the crappy quality. On the bright side.... EXPLOSION.
One more section to go.
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Characters:
Rhea - [link]
Gracidea - [link]
Will - [link]
Kiriana - [link]
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Comments: 44
GAH this page is so intense, starts with building tension AND ENDS IN EXPLOSIONS 8U
crappy quality? NONSENSE >8U
And ah I love that panel with Gracidea's angry face, you did I really nice job with the clarity of emotional expression and it just looks so crisp and fierce. I really like all of the expressions on this page because there is such a variety :U
And of course the hug is so sweet \;v;/
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if you lose BFOI I will shit bricks. These comics kick to much ass. Your like flying in strides over the competition! (no offense to the other good submissions of course) INSPIRATIONAL! AAAAAAAAAA
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Well I've got my fingers crossed that I can pass this round... but I'm not sure how in favour I'll be in that I've 'axed' my character. I've probably broken the rules, so I'm expecting the worst.
But who knows! I hope I can pass... And thank you for the kind words once again 8D
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But at the same time its an awesome, well written and well drawn/colored story. I'm a firm believer in bending the rules to create something unique and awesome. you did a lot more interesting thing's with this lab than most of the other submissions my eyes caught. if you gotta bend some rules to create something new and interesting then I say YES, plus the BFOI judges aren't very stingy, unlike those AATR guys.
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Finally! You get your explosion!
Hmm... "Jump through the window to get out"...
...
Is that a Hitchhiker's reference?
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Gotta bring what I promise c:
Ahh not that I'm aware of. I've yet to finish that series >>
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I think it was during "The Restruant at the End of the Universe", but I'm not 100% sure...
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God, you are so right about the quality. Roar. 
Nahhh. Y'know how I feel about this braw--s'the bee's knees, better than that even--the bee's knees and elbows! <3
I will say more tomorrow when I am more coherent and not thinking about bee's having elbows.
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crappy quality? dude you be crazy this was amazing!!!!!
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Ahh... I guess it's because I know what I -can- do that it bothers me I have to show the rushed version. But this is the plight of deadlines.
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you have continually done absolutely amazing work throughout the entire competition. not only artistically but your story telling ability.
truly man you've done a wonderful job and keep up the amazing work. i look forward to seeing you in future rounds, even going all the way!
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Thank you again ;u; I'll keep my fingers crossed for passing!
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Gah I submitted that comment too early. ALL OF THIS IS SO EPIC. D'8 the timing the dialogue the awesome the details the panels... it's all super amazing. Congratulations, Zeit.
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"Crappy quality" my foot. Your art is easily one of the best (if not the single best) in the entire competition. Definitely the most professional looking and creative. The camera shots are amazing, several levels above some of the other comics I've read. The shading and quality is utterly breath taking. You never fail to disappoint.
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NOW HE CAN APPEAR LOTS C8
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The intensity with this is amazing! Extremely action-packed and full of adrenaline! It's the only comic I've ever had to read where I had to remind myself to breathe afterwards. Anticipating Part 6 like a child for Christmas, you are completely awesome!!!
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Haha thanks once again Aidan!
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Red+blue are the best match for lab colors indeed 8D
I like the sarcastic tone from MARC so much...he's even kind enough to provide a super-cool looking countdown when he makes explosions! 
And both Will and Gracidea act so manly heroic in your side >v<
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Well, where do I begin? I'd say this page is pretty explosive. I would make a comment dedicated to explosions, caesium the moment, but well, cool guys don't look at 'em. It's hard to make a joke when the best ones argon. I'M TELLING YOU.
The pacing in this is brilliant, the tension is exciting and builds up quicker than sodium breaks down in water. Also, Grace got me shipping Gracidea/Will (covalent) bonding, this has only doubled the strength! Ion-estly, this page is pretty damn gorgeous, the light in this piece, you haven't got Ne thing to worry about, my eyes are stuck to this page like glucose. Also, I hope no one's dead, I can't be doing which watching people barium.
I periodically make bad jokes, I guess a lot of oxidents happened in making this comment because it is poor and corrosive.
This comment is so bad, it is endothermic.
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TIME TO CAPTURE THE GERMAN TERRORIST ALAN RICKMAN C8
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this is necessary for my life
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SO FULL OF AMAZING! PEOPLE BETTER NOT DIE!! *on edge of seat*
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BUT.
WILL IS ALREADY DEAD.
TEHEHEH GHOST JOKES.
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Pfffftttt! You so funny!!
But seriously!
And seriously again I kinda feel sorry for having been ragging on Fritz all the time.
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<3 Aww... But not really c':
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-skids into first place because you stole the glory from me earlier- HA
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ASFSHGNG Comment sent too fast efsg. I meant to add "CRAPPY QUALITY? YOU NUTS?" Then I was going to add some silly action such as slapping you upside the head and whatnot. >I
Hrgggh, thanks for leaving us on a cliffhanger. You're horrid.
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