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thewritingthimble — Falling for You.
Published: 2012-04-09 08:38:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 5956; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 2073
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The image stock is from [link]As usual its an image with a 5,7,5 syllable structure poem.
I did this for someone special and have been working on it here and there over the past few days
you know who you are and I hope you like it.
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I believe the 5-7-5 syllable structure is called haiku--even though haiku are usually associated with nature, modern poetry usually accepts any content in 5-7-5 syllable/3 line pattern as haiku. Just for future reference
Anyhow, really nice poem!
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yeah I know it's haiku 
and yup I also realise I've flouted one of the main rules 
anyhows I'm glad you like it 
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You're welcome!
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aw thanks
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Hey, you are pretty awesome!
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I really like your poem
The font looks pretty which one is that or is it written by hand?
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I'm not sure
I'm happy that you like it though!
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You're welcome !
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Beautiful. It works perfectly, blends in with the words and the whole piece adds texture and colour to each element (the picture enhances the words, which give meaning to the picture). I love it.
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Thank you very much
I'm glad that you like it!
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A lovely piece.
I enjoyed it very much
Peace and blessings to you
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Aw shucks
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Thank you
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No problem.
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it
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Aw shucks
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Aw Thank you
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your welcome It is so nice
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hehe same
Now I feel sad that I had to use someone's stock because I don't have a cool key of my own
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Thank you
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ha i had to read this twice to make sure i was reading it right. its cool but on the last line, it says have let when it should be have to let. i would recommend changing it to must let.
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Thank you for taking the time to comment. As for the last line, I meant it in the way of which that the person has already been let in, not that it is a pending outcome. I'm sorry if that didn't seem clear but although there is the present tense of 'falling' I did intend for 'let' to be referred to as a past tense
Sorry if it seemed mildly ill matched with the tenses and such but thank you for bringing that it is in fact ill matched to light. I'll keep the idea in mind that the tenses should stay the same throughout a work, though in this case it isn't intended to be so.
Thank you for the comment it's much appreciated!
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ah my bad, i realize it does make sense. i didn t realize it was in past. but now i do think its fine the way it is.
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Thanks I'll keep in mind that changing tenses is confusing though for my future works
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