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thewronged β€” Linoleum-Contempt
Published: 2004-12-30 20:13:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description there you are sitting on floor
another broken lifeless slob
feebling beating on death's door
wishing, waiting for your god

you've really done it this time
you've finally made your point
your through with thinking thought crime
this time your pulling the knife

and now you breathing is faster
and your heart is pumping more blood
praying leave me not love me my master
i wanted to so bad to be good

contemptable compassionless mongrel
have you no love but for yourself
while your starring down the rifles barrel
try thinking about someone else

because life is just practicing politics
and seeing it off with a smile
not dreaming of deaths warm antics
while you lay on the linoleum tile
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Comments: 9

bluefireangel25 [2004-12-31 20:41:09 +0000 UTC]

WOOt you wrote something! It’s really good; I like the third and last stanzas the most, but the rest is good too

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thewronged In reply to bluefireangel25 [2004-12-31 20:42:27 +0000 UTC]

gracias.

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chickentaco101 [2004-12-31 15:17:46 +0000 UTC]

"because life is just practicing politics
and seeing it off with a smile
not dreaming of deaths warm antics
while you lay on the linoleum tile "

Love that bit. Like the rest of it too, it seems rather frantic.

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thewronged In reply to chickentaco101 [2004-12-31 19:46:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks sarah. im glad you like it.

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sekmet667 [2004-12-31 04:09:04 +0000 UTC]

wow, its good work, a bit, uh scary and sad, bt well written

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thewronged In reply to sekmet667 [2004-12-31 19:45:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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sekmet667 In reply to thewronged [2004-12-31 20:27:53 +0000 UTC]

your very much welcoem

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TearsOfTorment [2004-12-30 20:29:50 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome work.

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thewronged In reply to TearsOfTorment [2004-12-30 20:32:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you. *goofy ass smile*

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