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Thexundertakerxx — Contest Entry For EriSol Group

Published: 2011-09-25 19:28:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1843; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 1
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Description Oh shit lordy I worked so hard on this.
Okay So here is the story behind it.
For the contest that is holding. It closes 9/29.
EDIT: Man this has so many favorites, I would love if people commented on it! I looked at the other entries, and saw I have a little bit of a chance. Karkat is blurred out because he has kind..no meaning.

STORY:
Sollux stopped for a second. This was a lot to handle. Aradia died, Feferi died and now Eridan died. He swears if another troll close to him dies, he will lose control.
" Is he really dead? " Sollux asked Karkat, who was standing next to him.
" YEA, HES DEAD. " Karkat mumbled, then pulled at Sollux's arm. " COME ON, " he growled, " I DON'T WANT GAMZEE TO CATCH US OR ANYTHING. " Sollux wouldn't budge.
" There is n0 way hes dead y0u kn0w I mean theres n0 way," Karkat growled.
" HE'S FUCKING DEAD, GONE, END OF STORY, DEAD, BYE BYE." Karkat was a bit harsh.
" 0kay KK shut up f0r a sec0nd 0kay let me try and handle this," Sollux blinked. " H0w did he die?" he asked, tears starting to fill his eyes. Karkat groaned.
" OH MY FUCKING JEGUS, HE GOT FUCKING CHAINSAWED IN HALF IT LOOKS LIKE, OKAY CAN WE GO NOW?"
"0h," Sollux murmed. " And he killed FF? S0 then why did he die?" Karkat was getting really annoyed.
" OKAY DID YOU GET REALLY STUPID OR SOMETHING, BECAUSE YOURE ACTING LIKE IT. THERE IS NO WAY YOU ARE SERIOUS. OKAY I THINK KANAYA LIKE KILLE DHIM OR SOMETHING BECAUSE HER THINGIE IS A CHAINSAW OKAY."
Sollux laughed.
" But he killed KA, s0 h0w did she kill him?"
" SHE CAME BACK AS A FUCKING VAMPIRE."
"0h." Sollux began to cry. " But there's n0 way hes dead, hes pr0bably just sleeping or s0mething, he's going t0 get up and be all 'S0l! There y0u are, I was l00kin for y0u!' and then we w0uld play fight again, because i mean i never actually tried t0 kill him when we did that, then FF will c0me back and be like '0h you tw0 st0p glubbing ar0und!' " Sollux began to giggle, tears streaming down his face. He was forcing a smile. Karkat teared up. Sollux was acting like such an innocent grub.
" And then, he'll ask t0 be my kismesis, and this time i will say yes, because well i always wanted to be his kismesis, but y0u kn0w when y0ure t00 shy t0 tell s0meb0dy s0mething right? S0 like then we will hate again."
Karkat pulled at Sollux's arm again.
" COME ON SOLLUX, THIS IS GETTING OUT OF HAND."
Sollux shook his head.
" N0, wait KK, I want t0 tell him s0mething."
" YOU CANT TELL A DEAD BODY SOMETHING, FUCKASS!"
" 0h but I can, y0u kn0w when i used to be able t0 hear th0se v0ices, his v0ice is pr0bably calling my name t0 talk t0 him, but i cant hear him anym0re, s0 i guess i w0uldnt kn0w, but i feel like he is." Karkat grunted.
"FINE, WHATEVER, TALK TO THE BODY. BUT DON'T TAKE TOO LONG, WE HAVE TO KEEP RUNNING. "
Sollux went on the ground, on all fours and reached for Eridan.
" Hey EA, " he whispered. " Its me, s0llux, i just wanted t0 tell y0u that im s--" he gulped, trying to stop himself from crying. " I'm s-s0rry f0r being s0 mean t0 y0u EA,i want t0 tell y0u that i always wanted t0 be y0ur kismesis, but i never wanted t-t0 tell you because i w-was scared t-that y0u were ly-ying 0r s-s0mething..." He kissed Eridan's cheek. " I h0pe y0u and FF have a w0nderful afterlife, and i pr0mice ill leave her t0 y0u when i get there." Sollux got up.
" 0kay KK, im ready t0 g0."
" OH MY GOD YES NOW LETS GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE."

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I listened to this song for inspiration:

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Song (c) Temposhark
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Comments: 13

mydurisekel [2012-04-21 12:49:23 +0000 UTC]

*SnIfF*...

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animeninjaNIPPON [2011-09-28 19:28:12 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing! I love Karkat's input in the story, too

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Thexundertakerxx In reply to animeninjaNIPPON [2011-09-29 19:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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animeninjaNIPPON In reply to Thexundertakerxx [2011-09-30 00:13:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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paroapockinroo [2011-09-25 19:41:36 +0000 UTC]

I can tell you worked hard on this it is very good ^.^

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Thexundertakerxx In reply to paroapockinroo [2011-09-25 19:44:38 +0000 UTC]

It took about 30-40 minutes o3o thanks brother!

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GrimAngelSkyaCross [2011-09-25 19:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Very touching and very sad. I loved it <3 Good work

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Thexundertakerxx In reply to GrimAngelSkyaCross [2011-09-25 19:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you glub~

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GrimAngelSkyaCross In reply to Thexundertakerxx [2011-09-25 19:37:28 +0000 UTC]

y0ur welc0me! ^-^

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Thexundertakerxx In reply to GrimAngelSkyaCross [2011-09-25 19:40:19 +0000 UTC]

//dead//

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GrimAngelSkyaCross In reply to Thexundertakerxx [2011-09-25 19:43:55 +0000 UTC]

*tries to remember to vote for you to win*

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Thexundertakerxx In reply to GrimAngelSkyaCross [2011-09-25 19:45:57 +0000 UTC]

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GrimAngelSkyaCross In reply to Thexundertakerxx [2011-09-25 20:02:18 +0000 UTC]

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