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ThinkyBrain — edward WIP1
Published: 2012-06-04 01:27:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 39; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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here's a work in progress of (another) portrait of edward from fma. i just wanted some critique/suggestions before i move on too much.there are some obvious things i need to clean up, but otherwise suggestions are great.
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I just started rewatching FMAB. I love remembering why I love this show! Ling Yao, my personal favourite character, is just about to make his first appearance omg
AHEM. Anyway, the nose is slightly off, I think. The farthest nostril should show more, considering the angle of his face. I think his eyebrows look a bit too high up, and they could both stand to be a bit less slanted (unless that's what you're going for, in which case I would personally move them both down some more anyway, because in their current position he looks angry and surprised at the same time, haha). You might want to consider making his jawline a little rounder, but that's just a personal opinion, there's nothing anatomically wrong about the jawline from what I can see.
I think everything else is fine. You're great at drawing hair! //jealous
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OMG ling. <3
thank you so much for the great reply, it means a lot that you took the time to help out. it definitely helps to get an objective view on things.
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