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Published: 2016-09-28 19:26:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 2336; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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(f/n) woke early in the morning and got dressed in a cream colored dress with a green corset before packing away her maroon one and several other things she'd need on the road. With that done she stepped out of the hall and sighed, the dwarves were quiet but most were awake, she carefully side stepped some that were still sleeping or just avoid the ones that were not paying attention before adding her bag to the pile of things they would be taking with them before turning to go to the kitchen. She rounded a corner and walked into Thorin, her face even with his chest, he let out a soft 'umph' and looked down at her, her face was bright red “Pardon me, Master Thorin.” He smiled as she side stepped him and hurried to the kitchen before it vanished and he was pulled into the same room by her horrified gasp. “Master Thorin, I will a lot your people many things, but I will not have them leave this house in this state. Unless you wish me to go to Gandalf with this issue, you and your kin best clean up this kitchen.”
“Why can't you do it?” He sighed, they did not have time for this, he looked down at her and her glare told him other wise “Alright fine. But don't blame me if they break something.” He turned and rounded up a few dwarves who set about cleaning up the room, when it was presentable she set about making herself breakfast before going into the feasting area and sitting across from Kili happily sipping tea and eating eggs.
“You boys better move this table back before you leave.” She said, he looked over at her and shrugged. “Would your mother want you treating a host like you are?”
“I guess not?” Kili offered, hoping to have picked the right the words to appease and silence the hobbit.
“Then you will move the table back.” (f/n) nodded and ate happily when she was done Kili, Fili, Dwalin, and Dori shoved the table back into place and she inspected the rest of Bag End. Deeming it acceptable and went to the door and pulled her cloak on.
“Leaving already?” Gandalf asked, pulling his pipe out and puffing.
“Unlike you and your wizarding way, I have a schedule to keep.” She pulled her bag onto her bag and opened the door. “And please see they keep the house nice till you leave? Bilbo would die if he saw how it looked this morning.”
“We're leaving now.” Thorin interrupted while pulling on his cloak and pack, “We're getting ponies and setting out as soon as everyone is ready.” (F/n) nodded and opened the door, before she could step out the dwarves that had all packed into Bag End marched passed her, Dori and Gloin ignoring her holding the door while Ori, Nori, Bofur, Balin, Oin, Bifur, Bomber, and Dwalin marched passed with soft thank yous or grunts followed by Fili, Kili, and Thorin. The brothers flashed her heart stopping smiles while Thorin just looked at her and sighed, silently calling her an unneeded tag along; finally Gandalf walked out and (f/n) closed the door behind herself, casting one last glance over her shoulder, hoping to see Bilbo before setting off.
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spikora13 [2016-12-15 22:16:00 +0000 UTC]
How many more chapters did you plan? If you were planning on having it be a long one, maybe just go with your favorite (or Thorin...or Fili...or Kili... ) But if it is shorter, maybe you could do a 'choose your own adventure' style and write an ending for a couple different dwarfs?
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Tholac In reply to spikora13 [2016-12-15 23:33:11 +0000 UTC]
First: I will tell you the truth: I have lost most of my interest in posting anything, mostly because my readers are content to read what I post but not comment or share ideas with me.
Second: Dwalin is my favorite, followed by Thorin then Fili
Third: I work retail and as its almost Christmas I rarely get time to write.
And finally, if you want more I can always try but I can't promise they'll be good nor can I promise I will update it in a timely manner
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spikora13 In reply to Tholac [2016-12-16 18:30:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry to hear that sweetie. I understand if you are unable to write more, especially during this season. And if you don't feel up to it, then don't worry! ^^ It is an amazing story all on its own I feel kinda bad, I'm new to this site, so I'm still figuring it out, so I haven't really been commenting, but I will be sure to comment more when I read stories! ^^ I hope you season is merry and bright!
And I want to add, you are an amazing writer ^^ Never think that your stories aren't good, because they pull me in and get me immersed in the story, makes me beg for more ^^
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Tholac In reply to spikora13 [2016-12-16 18:38:54 +0000 UTC]
I intend to write more for some stories but like some of my other fanfics this one might fall by the way side for a while. I've been told by many I work with that next month will be slow so perhaps next month I'll be able to do more writing
Thank you, it makes me happy to hear that. I hope the holidays are fun and full of happiness for you
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