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Thomperfan — Fanfic Failures: Whitewashed
Published: 2018-10-28 02:18:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 4743; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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The Loud House fanficAuthor: AnimationFan15
Cringe-Inducing Dialogue: 5/10
Cringe-Inducing Visuals: 6/10
Lackluster Writing: 9/10
Annoyance: 10/10
Disturbing Content (Out of Place): 2/10
Unnecessary Cruelty: 10/10
Rancid Morality: 5/10
Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar errors: 1/10
Unfortunate Implications: 8/10
Character Derailment: 9/10
Overall Ranking: 65/100
Other notes: I’ve already made a blog explaining my thoughts on this story, which you can read here, so, I’ll try to keep it brief. The sisters are written incredibly horrible, Lincoln gets punished when he doesn’t deserve it. The writer tries to write Lola as the main antagonist, when all of the sisters were at fault, and that scene in the middle was so terrible. It was like that scene in Syngenesophobia except worse. On the plus side, Lincoln’s comic book was actually a pretty cool idea, Clyde, Bobby and Ronnie Anne were all in character, and the ending was kind of sweet, but those are the only pluses I can give it. Other than that, it’s bad.
Image was made by AnimationFan15.
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Comments: 3
Did you have permission from Animationfan to post his artwork?
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Okay, I checked with him and he said it was okay.
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