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Published: 2009-03-05 16:58:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3304; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 7
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And here comes page 10! woot...10 pages... ._.
I'm...not sure about this page. I LOVE the first panel and hate the background of the big panel, especially the mountains. XD Any tips on how I can make them look...good?! T_T
And yeeessss...I fail. I really fail. Remember that I've told you that I won't make my speech bubbles look faded? Well, I was really unhappy with the look of my last pages, so I thought I should change something. Making the speech bubbles look like that really changed something. x_x *headdesk* I have to update the other pages now... XD"

Eh, nothing more to say...still need to make a sheet for Yeno, but first I have to concentrate on my finals. x_x

German page will come later...I'm having a severe headache today and am terrible tired. x_x


Btw. wtf is wrong with the "featured images"?! For a week now I'm trying to move my "Ahsoka" picture down two images...it_won't_stay! X_X It's moving back immediately after refreshing the page! x___x *annoyed*
Btw. I've put some glowing color on the lightsaber. *hrrgl* It looks awesome now at night! XD

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Comments: 10

timmytier [2009-03-06 17:09:07 +0000 UTC]

Das erste Panel ist aber auch toll <3
Und beim zweiten stören mich nur die Outlines. Die gehören da nicht hin >:C
Sonst ist das aber auch super <33

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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to timmytier [2009-03-18 09:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Danke dir! ^^

Oh, ...stimmt, die sehen richtig fehl am Platz aus. XD
Hmmm...muss ich mir mal was einfallen lassen, wie ich das in Zukunft besser ausschauen lasse! :3

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timmytier In reply to ThorinFrostclaw [2009-03-19 20:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Entweder den Vordergrund ebenfalls outlinen, oder die Linien dezent färben/ganz weglassen~

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RukiFox [2009-03-06 12:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Schaut gut aus, gibt es das auch in deutsch dann?

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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to RukiFox [2009-03-18 09:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Danke dir!
Jup, ist jetzt in meinen Scraps auffindbar. ^^

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KimmenWolf [2009-03-05 17:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's so awesome, love your comic. Really interesting. I loved the beginning story, really nice done with the creation of the comics past.
Love the title name, Howl.
I really like how you have improve from the first pages, the anatomy of the wolves is much better and so comes it with better poses. And the backgrounds is so great.
Keep the good work up

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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to KimmenWolf [2009-03-18 09:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you very much!
Actually it's Howl!(yes, with the !), but DA doesn't like having "!"s in their deviation titles. XD
I'm glad you like the name! On the one hand, I think it's a very simple one, but on the other I really like it! :3

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KimmenWolf In reply to ThorinFrostclaw [2009-03-18 15:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh right I hate when dA don't allow such as !,? and symbols like that.
Anyway, you're welcome <3

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meroe1313 [2009-03-05 17:03:54 +0000 UTC]

I see nothing wrong with the background! Any more detail in it and you'd die doing the rest of the pages! And you're right, the semi-transparent speech bubbles looks nice.

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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to meroe1313 [2009-03-18 09:54:14 +0000 UTC]

It's the mountains, they're annoying me so much... XD They look like they've been cut out and just put on the image... *eek*
'glad you like it! ^^

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