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Published: 2009-07-07 19:36:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1671; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 48
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So seriously I guess this is done for now, but I cant tell, somethings tell me about it big time...i just don't know whatSo ive been at work on it since 8 am...after laundry...
Soooo what I need you to do is tell me what you think is missing or wrong...and ill tell you what i think is now...
I think theres something missing inside the room..you know that space behind the window
I think there maybe should be something by her foot like a cat or a bird...
I also pondered putting a person near the curtain behind her...
but i just dont know...
also...I keep feeling like theres a distinct edge where her back- and the wall meet up..that makes her look like shes falling out of the window instead of sitting on it LOL
Inspiration came from this beautiful piece
by an awesome artist. [link] :iconmiss_ninja:go check out her stuff and watch her...shes worth it.
Window- [link]
Model- [link]
Window Background- [link]
Curtain- [link]
Roses- [link]
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Comments: 12
It is a beautiful piece! Β I kind of like the absence of objects around the wall; it is offset by the flowers and the fabric on the left. Β You mentioned having something near her foot - her position does seem precariously balanced, so perhaps having something that her foot is resting on would aid in this. Β Even adjusting the placement of her left foot so that her heel is resting on part of the bench. Β Realistically, to try to sit in this position as is, without an additional weight-bearing point would be incredibly difficult. Maybe she could also be holding one of the flowers in her right hand. Β
Again, it's a lovely piece, but since you asked for suggestions, I aim to assist
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I think this is gorgeous ^^
Perhaps the flowers could be a bit less defined? They are quite sharp compared to the rest of the work.
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I don't see any of the problems you speak of. I think it looks amazing!
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hehe..thanks
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I know the feeling. I hope you find it, whatever it is.
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