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Published: 2015-07-27 15:38:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1643; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 111
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A whispering world, without rhythmic melodies, softly dares to sing. What shall come, then, of this land? Shall chaos rule at last, over the sound of silence which had once prevailed? Will the voices be uncounted and the songs unnumbered? Who can speak or say, as this new dawn approaches, what might come at last?After about two weeks of work -- in a total of over 30 revisions -- I have finally finished this. I have many people to thank for their aid and support, however most notably C-91 , ChaosFissure , and BoxTail .
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Thank you! How's the book coming along?
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It's undergoing a bit more of a substantive rewrite than I had originally envisioned (including giving one of the characters a wife) based on excellent critique/feedback from my writers' group.
Should be all the better for it though.
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It's great to hear that you're receiving constructive criticism regarding your work. Best of luck to you!
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super beautiful! all the effort you put into it was worth it!
Cool title also!
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I didn't do much. 
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Yes, you did: you offered suggestions and support. For both (and the compliment) I thank you.
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