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Published: 2006-01-01 21:20:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Not lost around the othersBut also not quite aware
His voice and eyes were all together
When his mind was hardly there
Inviciable was not his way
Invisable was more his style
I wish he would have chose to stay
But he's left for a little while
A cande burns to bottom wick
A morning that shook me up
The pained endured wasn't quick
Because he won't wake up.
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Ooh, very cool. "His voice and eyes were all together/When his mind was hardly there" reminds me of math class-induced stupor! Math usually has the effect of making me drool on the desk... glad to see you can put it to better use ^^
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haha danke shan....least someone see's my math-coma-induced stupor has talent.
^^
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I'm impressed that you were able to write this during a math class. It's really cool. I like it ^_^
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Thanx....
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