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Published: 2011-09-26 23:31:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 564; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 1
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Guys I didn't merge all the layers this time I can actually try and fix things!!Autumn is my favorite season okay u___u also everything-hot chocolate is a gift from jesus
okay?
okay
also I have that scarf, I just neverr wear it because I can't wear accessories, they bug me to death auugh to uncomfortable ;n;
uhh I don't really like this but whatever have it anyway~
the whipped cream looks alright, I guess u___u but I need to learn how to draw backgrounds, especially tree LEAVES oh goodness.
bleh I hope this looks okay on other computers, my screen tends to warp colors differently than my laptop, so...:/
crits please u___u
especially on the background, and maybe some links to tutorials? :/ blah I couldn't find any decent ones
/edit: go on laptop
colors are horrible
cry
/edit: realize the tassels from the ropes on the swing are gone
cry
sob I have to fix so many things
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Comments: 61
HAHA. Goodness, Thunder. You make me laugh.
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-serious face-
I want them :C
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backgroudn looks nice its good enough ..
been a while since u drew thunder
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Thank you~<3
Haha, or her fuzzy form at least, I've been drawing her as a pony lately.
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Ohmeged Thunder this is so precious ;A; <333
I really like the sky and the colorsss ;u;
& the expression, :'D Really cute and peaceful~
Good job on this!! You've improved a lot ;u;
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aaaahhh thank youuu ;u; <3
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Aaah, this gets me that much more excited for the cooler autumn days~ ;U;
I really love how you did the lighting, Thunder<33
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I'm so pumped for them sjfjds <3
thank you ;u;
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Yeessss<33
You're welcome~ n3n
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Affgnadjklgnjdk this is amazing Thundah ;u; The lighting and background is beautiful, it has a really nice atmosphere to it o:
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YOUR BGs ARE BETTER THAN MINE.
Thats how your Septembers look? Most of our trees are still green
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LOLIDOUBTIT
PFFFnah
I just didn't want to title it a different month since it is september u__u
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SRS FAEC IS SRS.
ohrofl you still did beautifully ;u;
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SEE IM PRO AT CRITIQUING YOUR ART
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Going through my messages, look away as I move to the next picture. Look back. Gag on drink.
83 Awesome job!
I can't pick out anything wrong with it, so...
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I DIDN'T MEAN TO MAKE YOU GAG :C
Thanks~<3
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I GAGGED COZ THAT'S HOW AWESOME IT WAS <3
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I just knew the finished piece would be GORGEOUS. <33
Everything is just so akdlskajh <3
I'm not good at drawing anything so I can't give any helpful crits... <:I Sorry bro.
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ffff thanks <3
nopethosearelies
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Nopethoseweretruths
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I am not the greatest with critiques,
buuuut
I do have some really nice tutorials that might help some stuffs C:
[link] Trees
[link] Smoother shading
[link] Glowy effects (maybes for like the back glow >u>)
And
I really like that scarf. I want to touch it XD
Yes, you have improved sooo much Thunds. I love this one >u> Its so peaceful and pretty. I think you're getting better at getting emotions through the picture -nod-
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okay I think I just
suck
or something
because I can't understand these tutorials at all :c
-cries in a corner-
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aw D:
Well
first of all,
You don't suck.
Second of all, I just like going by the pictures and picking out pieces that do make sense XD What don't you get?
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-pouts-
all of it
dskjndgjd
orz
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Gaspp thanks bro ;u; I hope these help fndskjngds
Thank yooou!<3
LOL THERE'S EMOTIONS IN THIS?
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No problem 8D I always hate not being able to find good tuts XD
Welcome!
AND YES DAMN IT Its all pretty and it makes me feel all calm and relaxed after a crappy day at school -nod-
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omg, this looks great!!!!!!!
should i wake you up when it ends in 4 days? -shot-
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youre very welcome!
ok, wasnt sure if the song reference was ok or not....
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...oh my gosh Thunder you have improved so much ;O; seriously. this looks great! it really really does >U< you're getting so much better at making stuff look 3D.
hmmmm Iiiii think what you could maybe start to work on more is being more daring with using colors, like in fur. you see how it pretty much looks like you just used one shade of pink for everything and then a lighter shade for the lighting? you should start playing around with giving the fur more texture and some other shades. I'm sure you know what I mean. XD But of course I get that the way you color is a big part of your style and that you aren't necessarily going for more of a realistic look.
As for the bg, I think it would really help if you used photo refs just to get a better feel for the lighting and colors and stuff. and it would probably help for getting the textures of the leaves better (which i should totally not even comment on considering that makes me a massive hypocrite and I hate trying to darw leaves on an actual tree it kills me) But even just for playing around with different tree shapes. You're doing a good job of getting away from the lollipop tree look, keep going with that .o.
lol giant text wall HAVE FUN READING THROUGH ALL THAT -runs away and hides-
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-actually gets crit-
-squeak of joy- u___u
Oof yes color is like...THE hardest thing for me ever ;n; I did try and use different shades of pink but it didn't work out too well v.v;
NOPE DON'T USE THE STYLE THING THAT IS UNACCEPTABLEEEEE!
photo refs are something I need to remember to use pffahaha I always forget
until I'm almost done
and then I'm like "FACK"
-salutes-
THANKS FOR THE ACTUAL CRIT LOL<3
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XDD
It might help to try out some tutorials on coloring fur .o. I think Pb has some good ones in her faves somewhere...
XD YEYYY SMART PERSON
XD yeahh photo refs are one of the best ways to improve. Maybe you should try practicing with just drawing some landscaped based off refs .o. it might help, even if it's painful and boring XD
XD NO PROBLEM I WOULD HAVE WANTED THE SAME
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I will stalk her faves then u_u
Maybe >:0 I'm not very good at finding good photo references though orz
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XD or you can just ask her
You can usually find some cool stuff on dA if you look under photography-nature-landscapes or whatever order it goes in XD I don't mind helping you find some if you're having trouble~
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but if I'm sneaky I'll feel more accomplished
like a thief
v.v
okay! : D Thanks~<3 I normally just google pfahaha
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that.
is an excellent point.
XD
no problem XD google is our friiieeend yesss
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OHMYGOSHTHUNDER
Quit talking bad about yourself, this is GREAT!
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