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Description I made this little comics for 's contest.

I think Guy-ra was made by Lyra, at least that's what I think, reading Veggie's comics. And I could read more Guy-ra-Lyra comics, then Lyra-Bonbon, so I thought maybe Bonbon could be a little jealous of this.
So I thought if Bonbon ask Lyra to spend finally some time together just the 2 of them, how can Lyra shake off Guy-ra. Because I think he is always there for a little trouble So Lyra made Bonbon's stalion version, of course without asking Bonbon... The question is: How good idea was this?

I really like the part when Bonboy say "Sweet!". I think it's really fit for him, someone how has something "sweet" as a cutie mark

Did you know: Bonbon front mane color is sometime switching color? Making some research from Bonbon I saw that sometime the color in her mane (in the cartoon too) switch. Sometime the blue is the front, and the pink is the back, and reverse. Couldn't really decide witch is the good one.

Update: Featured on Equestria Daily! Yay! [link]
Thanks everyone, who helped me fix some mistakes!

Update (2013.06.18): I changed Boyboy name to Bonboy! You suggested, and I admint it's really suits him better I wanted to change it much more earlier, but I totally forget

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Comments: 300

oscar2008123 [2013-01-18 15:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant.

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Centaur71 [2013-01-18 15:48:32 +0000 UTC]

two sides of the same coin, ponies; two sides of the same coin...

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Abbi-Black In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 15:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe! This made my day!

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Fire-seeker [2013-01-18 15:38:05 +0000 UTC]

That is brilliant
Lyra's expression in the last panel made me cracked up

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JAVAgamer [2013-01-18 14:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Boyboy has swag.

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MLPLOVER4EVER In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 14:27:02 +0000 UTC]

hahahahhahahhaahaha

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Heresjohnno [2013-01-18 11:50:12 +0000 UTC]

BoyBon sounds better, and I read his line in Peter Griffins voice.

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Sukeiisu In reply to Heresjohnno [2013-01-18 12:06:15 +0000 UTC]

i would pay to hear him read a mlp story to me

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alek4ever In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 11:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Personally I think BoyBon sounds better... Aw well.

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2011anvil [2013-01-18 10:08:09 +0000 UTC]

DID YOU WON?!!!

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xaq10r [2013-01-18 09:57:49 +0000 UTC]

...

...

How did I not see that coming?

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Bublik88 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 09:44:57 +0000 UTC]

I spit my coffee out as i see boyboy...
Great work thanks for this^^

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schneelocke In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 09:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha... thanks, I needed that laugh. Brilliant comic.

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TimoW In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 09:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, look at it this way Bonbon: You were made for each other.

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MasterChief01 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 07:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Lyra's got the cloning skills.

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Sire-Sword In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 07:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Lyra know's how to make more of them!

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DarthHaySeed In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 07:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Dat hair makes Boyboy look like a cheap Elvis.

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RoyCalbeck In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 07:25:07 +0000 UTC]

hee hee hee hee hee... I can't stop grinning...

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Zalleus In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 06:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Completely Veggie style (and by that I mean looks like it's strait from the show). Looks fantastic.

I'm a nit-pick, so if you're still looking for grammatical criticisms, I do have one that doesn't seem to have been adressed.

The first panel has the sentence "since Guy-ra is a part of our life...". The "is" implies present tense, when past tense would probably be more appropriate. I would swap the "is" with became to make that first part past tense.

Not a "mistake" so much as a "criticism", so I hope no offense was taken, neither has any been intended.

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moonlightavenger In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 06:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Comma-Kazie [2013-01-18 06:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Very impressive, I thought this was a Veggie55 submission when I first saw it.

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BlackBoltThunder In reply to Comma-Kazie [2013-01-18 06:36:35 +0000 UTC]

Me too. And I found it very weird that the eyes from the ponies had only 2 "reflections" on them while Veggie always does 3, even in adult ponies (which is normally only seen on fillies)

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Veggie55 In reply to BlackBoltThunder [2013-01-18 17:08:26 +0000 UTC]

"he eyes from the ponies had only 2 "reflections" on them while Veggie always does 3"

Jeez, didn't even notice that myself D:

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BlackBoltThunder In reply to Veggie55 [2013-01-19 15:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Really? I thought you do the eyes that way because you liked it more xD

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Kitmaro In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 06:06:51 +0000 UTC]

The funs just been doubled.
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

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Dibullba In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 06:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Wonder if he has many voices as well >.>

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Masdragonflare In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:46:47 +0000 UTC]

hhhazhxh xD

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Cjbronyten In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:38:01 +0000 UTC]

thats funny

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MegaPatron In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Boy Boy? oh lawldy..

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attack193 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:21:43 +0000 UTC]

It should be "go peek at/on the mares".

Lol! This is awesome! XD

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Fuzunga In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:20:17 +0000 UTC]

You should have made him Jamaican and called him MonMon.

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Wilson8787 In reply to Fuzunga [2013-01-18 06:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Good one!

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PhillieChi In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:16:44 +0000 UTC]

*grammatical error*"C'mon BoyBoy! Let's peek the mares at the spa"
*better line* "C'mon BoyBoy, let's go spy on the mares at the spa"

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Not-A-Guest In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:12:22 +0000 UTC]

XD

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PnFForever11 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 05:08:29 +0000 UTC]

i think of squee at that last panel when lyra smilled nervously

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SolaceAndSilence In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll be honest, BoyBoy looks freaking weird.

Other than that,

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W0nderbolts In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:57:32 +0000 UTC]

made for veggie55 contest? seems like the type of comic he would make

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Laeko-Randalis In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Their faces in the final panel!

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miniapplejack In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:39:56 +0000 UTC]

I hit the third panel and I screamed! (not a good idea when in a hotel room). Also, Bonbon's mane color matches her propensity for the everchanging voice. Now all she needs is a color/shapeshifting cutie mark.

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BronyHunter97 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:34:53 +0000 UTC]

clever girl

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GiromCalica In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:26:07 +0000 UTC]

lol perverts they were

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deathfromabov In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:17:35 +0000 UTC]

CREEPY!

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dknights411 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:15:17 +0000 UTC]

WHO ELSE BUT LYRA!!!

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PhillieChi In reply to dknights411 [2013-01-18 05:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Is this a Quagmire reference?

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templar127 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:08:54 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD! I'm still ROFLing!!!

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Jovey4 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 04:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Guyra's awesome! Egophiliac and a large contingent have grown fond of calling male BonBon 'DudeBro' I wonder what the r63 fans think?

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emillz1 In reply to ??? [2013-01-18 03:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Lyra's face in the last panel is just priceless!

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Enmar123 [2013-01-18 03:44:11 +0000 UTC]

omg super sheepish face

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DeJiKo07 [2013-01-18 03:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Lyra, you're so in trouble!!!

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Armetron [2013-01-18 03:20:12 +0000 UTC]

boyboy?
I was thinking bonboy or boybon
eh whatever

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