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Published: 2016-08-28 10:00:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 641; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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And that concludes the second chapter of Greycape...I hope you all have enjoyed this summer's chapter, following the King of Crime Fighting of the coastal city at the brink of insanity. As an author, I can say this comes quite fitting since today is my last free day before returning to college.
For those who wishes to review this chapter, I have left a critique box open. I thank you all for bearing with me for these 26 pages. We'll see when the next chapter comes out. Hopefully a bit earlier.
The Greycape will return!
Here is an epilogue made by that pretty much fills up what happened to Psycho:
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Comments: 17
The relationship between Richard and Irene is so Beautiful
He makes it look almost easy to ask out the girl you like XD
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#richpeople
In all seriousness though, in this flashback they are supposed to have been together for some time, this was more business related, now when they were to finish their studies.
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Alright that is it... I am done with this chapter.... My honest opinion, the story felt less coherent that the last one... And the fight between psycho and grey-cape was a bit anti-climatically.... But other than that it was ok.
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Thanks for the short critique.
I tried to make it a coherent one but I guess that was a bit hard with a timespan reaching well over just a few hours, like the last chapter. I also tried to add more to the ambiance of New Teufort and maybe that got me a bit side tracked. If you have any tips on how to make the story more coherent, be sure to tell.
The final battle could have been done better, indeed. I actually had plans on making it much more brutal but due to already going over the budget of pages as well as general lack of time it turned out like it did.
I am glad you liked the story otherwise. If you have any other critiques, feel free to give them in the critique section.
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Glad you liked it, mate.
We'll see whenever chapter 3 will come out.
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Aww yis. It would be real funny if he lost that match tho
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Who knows? I most certainly don't.
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ahhh i remember how i did fencing in junior high
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i was merely a low class fighter
and in a way yes you have to train hard to master it! like taek-won-doe, I also trained in that last college sememster
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Indeed. He got those skills from fencing.
Wait..."sword"?
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To make it quick, tell me Greycape's weapon name.
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I honestly haven't came up with any name for his weapon except for "sword".
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