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Published: 2011-11-27 05:34:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 12445; Favourites: 177; Downloads: 96
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UPDATE(July 2012): This chapter has been completely revamped. This is the definitive polished version of it.Click on the arrows to navigate through the pages.
NUMBER OF PAGES: 21.
This is the first Donatello centric chapter. It might not seem that way, but Donatello is one of the most important characters in MNTGaiden. All the main turtles are important, actually.
All official TMNT characters are (c) Mirage Studios, Viacom and Nickelodeon
Previous chapter (CHP 5): [link]
Next chapter (CHP 7): [link]
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Comments: 54
Uuh poor Carole.... she misses her brother so much.
and Donatello I'm glad you have made yourself controlled.
in this kind of situation I fell pity for both Carole and Donnie....
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omg Donnie's completely lost it.
Also I totally just stumbled on this, loving it so far. Although I am curious how Leo has changed after so much time; starting to wonder if he's dead. I shall continue reading.
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Donnie you really need to get outside more. You're freaking everybody outΒ Β
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Is it wrong that I love Donnie's insane side? O.o
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Geez Donnie, 'human shield' of a little girl... no way...
Leo didn't take his reality; he forced everything on himself because he saw nothing before his awakening to Splinter's death, which, he only saw the end of.
Little Carole! BREATH!
Still love this!Β
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donnie is becoming really creepy, he scarying me.
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Carole reminds me of my 4-year old cousin named Kimberly!
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Uh....Is Donny gonna go mad scientist ape shit on us? He makes me feel like he's going to try an reanimate splinter or something....Or try and turn people into mutants or something... I don't know but I think he's lost it. 0.0 I mean, the fact that he even considered killing that girl is like...so crazy.
I like crazy Donny. Crazy just...just feels right with him.
Lol- is that weird? Lololol
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Oh Donnie....Splinter would be ashamed of you
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You could have redraw the pictures that we're already there the same way the we're back in 2005
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I wanna know how do you put the entire chapter onto DA?
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Please don't make donnatello put Carole in anymore danger.
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Love the new revamps on old chapters! I can really see the difference between the old ones.!!
BTW, on page 3, the last panel Donnie said "I have not choice", should it be "I have no choice"?
page 5 too, first panel, "loose them"...
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been awhile since I've seen this one. still invokes the same feelings too.
carol's Kawaii field seems rather low for donnie to be able to grab her like that.
still I always liked this chapter because it really shows donnies mental struggle
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Carol is sooooo CUTE!!! And Donnie expressing care for her, even below his own subconcious, made me go
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Wow, it actually looks really good being revamped. I really like how you add the side conversation between the two cops and how the police girl seem confidence.
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Thanks. The old version with the police officers confronting Donatello didn't sense at all. Even if it were in the most absurb anime-cartoon.
After all, the police officer (Eva) was SO incomptent in the old version that she shouldn't handle a gun in the first place, let alone be a police officer.
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If you are redrawing the comic, please don't throw away the old pages. I want to still see them.
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Sorry, they're gone from my site and from here.
I'm pretty sure someone has them saved somewhere on their PC, I'd prefer if people just stuck to this revamped version. It makes a lot more sense.
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Can I read it from obscure zodiac?
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who is the smartest one in group between, carole, shadow, davianna and renior, when he was angustus?, what is davianna's parents names and when they work at? and i'm talking about her adopted ones?
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tigerfog, when are you going to updated chapter 6 and 7???
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Whenever I have time. Reworking them is not as easy as it seems.
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no idea whats going on just randomly clicked on a chapter but im almost in tears...
so good!
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Donny's gone insane! D:
Hmm, very nive twist! I like how the genius turned mad, kind like a mad scientist!
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This chapter may need reworking for consistency.
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There's nothing inconsistent with this chapter...
The only things that might need some modification are the page format, the use of screentones and a better written dialogue.
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Ah,I think I picked a wrong English word...page format,that's what I meant...
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If the scene of your father got killed right before your very eyes doesn't drive you from a gentle, kind turtle to a twisted, wrecked mind, I don't know what does...
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This is the part when Donnie start showing his dark side...*sob*
While I was reading chapter 18...I was shocked...
"NO!!!DON!!!DON'T!!!"...*sob sob*
I like Carole cause she is so kind and cute~
Hope she wouldn't get killed by Don...She is such an angel! (Why do I have a feeling that Don will like her too? )
"GO CAROLE! BRING THE KIND DON BACK!!!" (Mistry vioce: Just ingnore her. She's out of her mind.)
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I REALLY WANT A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!
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Ah... I can't say anything... It's a SURPRISE!
I have already planned the ending...
Carole is supposed to be the naive voice of the whole cast of characters. She will always be nice to Donnie, that's all I can tell you for now.
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(Sorry, I just love this comic sooooooooooooooooooo much...)
(The story is hurting my heart...but...just couldn't...stop reading...and, LOVE IT!)
Can't wait to see chapter 22
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It doesn't just hurt for those guys, don't worry.
If there's hurt, there's healing as well. I'm just not there yet for Donatello and Leo... but you saw how Raph and Mikey's lives went from bad to good, right?
Things have to get worse before they get better.
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Yeh............................
It's good to see R&M become happy again...*hug*
(Now I'm worry about that poor policeman.)
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It's all about cause-and-effect.
The policeman that first appeared in CHP6 ("Tony") served in purpose in the storyline in CHP19 and it has an impact on the development of many characters.
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yeh...I see...
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oh babay!!!! i cant wait to read! loading.. loading.........
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Is it even working? Or is it loading indefinitely?
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naw... were good, im just impatient, i already read it a long time ago, just needed a refresher. your work is really good btw, but i will never look at don the same way twice!
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