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tigerlilyv In reply to iLonewolf [2008-11-17 14:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Lone - there are still many things that need to be cleaned up though (like repeating certain words too many times - need to find similar descriptive words other than "eternal" or "eternity"...reading though it again, that stuff tends to bother me about my writing. >.<* ). This was another "stream of consciousness" thing, but I put it in an image so it would be harder for me to delete from scraps, lol. >.>

Thanks much for the comment and fav!

-TL

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iLonewolf In reply to tigerlilyv [2008-11-17 17:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha... I am the same when I write my drafts and when I post them. I tend to repeat my words, simply because my train of thought is set and I am trying to get across my idea.

I find once I post here and read it, I edit it and correct any ackward spots. And that is the case with writing, just as in any art... when we look back on any prior work, we see that we can improve upon it. Simply because we have matured in our craft.

So I tend to look back on my prior work and not edit it. It is a milestone in which I return to and see how far I have come and understand where my roots began.

As I said, I love your stream of consciousness writing. It is better than a lot of renowned writers who employ that technique. For instance, I would much rather read your writing then that of James Joyce.

Thanks for sharing and I like the image with your text. Keep writing from your heart and don't be shy to share it. I'm certain I am not the only one who appreciates it.

/bow
Wolf

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tigerlilyv In reply to iLonewolf [2008-11-18 13:39:49 +0000 UTC]

/bow thank you Lone - your encouragement and support mean a lot to me, especially with my writing. I have always been afraid to really share my thoughts in words with others...never really thought it was really worth sharing or would interest anyone. This is one of the "very few" *cough* situations where I am glad I have been proven wrong.

-TL

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tigerlilyv In reply to Partner-in-crime [2008-11-17 14:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your kind words...and a fav! O_O I honestly don't think my writing is all that swell...its like the ebb and flow of the tide, sometimes it comes togther into something decent - most of the time its all just gibbersih. >.<

It really is inspiring to know others like some of my writing....I am grateful to know some of the things I say can make some sense to others - lol

Thank you so much for reading!

-TL

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Partner-in-crime In reply to tigerlilyv [2008-11-17 21:02:22 +0000 UTC]

No problemmo and COME ON!!!

this was so lovely. really. COURSE I FAVED IT!!!

And great Cant wait to see more

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