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Published: 2017-03-05 03:20:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 908; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 2
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Just a little test. Β Let me know where I should improve. Β I would appreciate any help I can get.Related content
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Tayma2uky In reply to TIM-idator [2017-03-07 02:24:26 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^^ hey, i have a question for you
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Tayma2uky In reply to TIM-idator [2017-03-07 02:28:41 +0000 UTC]
What is "commisons" i'm new around here but there still things that i don't understand can you tell me?
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TIM-idator In reply to Tayma2uky [2017-03-07 02:31:08 +0000 UTC]
Well, when you commission someone, you pay them to make something for you. There are two different types of commissions:
Commissions are paid for in money (through PayPal or something like that).
Point Commissions are paid for in DeviantArt points.
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TIM-idator In reply to Tayma2uky [2017-03-07 02:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, if you go to your profile and hover your mouse cursor over the "shop" button on the top bar, you can see how many points you have.
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gold94chica [2017-03-05 10:24:43 +0000 UTC]
If you're looking for advice, I'd say to try and pay closer attention to where you'd think the lights would actually be coming from. Β The main thing I see out of place here is that there seems to be some sort of bright light floating near under your right side, but it has no source, or interaction with the map. Β The same sort of effect seems to be happening on the balloons and presents too, they are lit up more from underneath than above. Β But the lights you do have from above look good
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TIM-idator In reply to gold94chica [2017-03-05 15:50:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was trying to light up the entire scene so nothing would be so dark. I also read somewhere that main light sources should come from actual lights on the map (lamps, flashlights, etc...). Is that a good tip to follow?
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gold94chica In reply to TIM-idator [2017-03-06 02:36:34 +0000 UTC]
oh yes of course, that's what I was trying to say. Β That your light sources should actually come from lights, since that's how it works IRL haha. Β Of course, for the most realism, you'll need extra lights, but that's really for pro stuff.
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VioletFox501 [2017-03-05 06:09:51 +0000 UTC]
May I post a... "Mini Critique", as like to call it? :3
Well, I really like the lighting on the character, but the backround is too bright. It would look a bit better if the backround wasn't that bright.
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TIM-idator In reply to VioletFox501 [2017-03-05 06:10:57 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I'll keep that in mind. Thank you
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The-cute-Mignon In reply to TIM-idator [2017-03-05 04:47:53 +0000 UTC]
The light is good enough for. :3
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