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Timetwister — Final Sleep
Published: 2004-08-15 01:22:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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As The Night FallsYou Go Back To Sleep
Finding Your Peace
For You The Stars Weep
Time Suspends Child
An Eclipse Of The Mind
A Whispering Tune
The Heartbreaking Kind
No Memories Lost
No Experiences Found
For In Your Sweet Dreams
No Limits Are Bound
A Small Tear Of Joy
A Sob Of Regret
Emotions Run Free
Your Destiny Set
The Night Slowly Ends
Your World Subtly Slows
It's Dreaded Work Done
Your Final Breath Flows
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Comments: 6
wh0a...so deep...
so gloomy...mysterious...
great p0em! i like the flow.
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absolutely beautiful. sorrow gives such wonderful inspiration.
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Very nicely done =o) I'm supposing this person died in their sleep? I like it that way because if you die in your sleep you neither happy nor sad. You're emotionless (usually) as you sleep. It's the perfect time to pass.
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You supposed right 
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Tis correct is he. They are of a very high calibre. So goes my highest accolade: Perfection
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BAAAAH!
I AM NOT WORRRRTHY!
Ok, maybe I should stop reading your PERFECT poems...makes me feel unworthy to write "poetry"...as I call it!
Well, I loved this poem, you write INCREDIBLY well and I'm sorry that you're in a sad mood all the time (at least, from what I read, it seems like you are)!...Bye! And try to feel happier!
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